Nice tune, i like it, very relaxing, like the piano melody and soft bass. Some instruments on the background could be louder i think. Don't like the transition with kicks, it just do not fit this kind of song. It would be better if that transfer was calmer.
The second half of the track is like...separate from the first, needs better transition imo.
I wasn't expecting that abrupt ending, lowering the volume in the end would be nicer. Just some fixes will make your track much better. Good work.
Originally posted by Noisebound
Nice tune, i like it, very relaxing, like the piano melody and soft bass. Some instruments on the background could be louder i think. Don't like the transition with kicks, it just do not fit this kind of song. It would be better if that transfer was calmer.
The second half of the track is like...separate from the first, needs better transition imo.
I wasn't expecting that abrupt ending, lowering the volume in the end would be nicer. Just some fixes will make your track much better. Good work.
Yeah probably the end will be different.Any way the kicks are to loud i will make automation clip on volume and i will make them better
If that don't work,i will change that
Thanks for the feedback
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Glodaragz: 31-10-2010 17:33.
nice drums and break piano is good a tad empty in places but kinda works coz it makes it a bit more spacey and airy some sort of jazz/funk vocal could work really well in here
not bad. i agree with you about the choir vocals, or even something of that nature. it needs something more as it seems a bit too empty for most of the track. i agree a bit with noisebound about bringing up some of them background synths more, just to kinda make it sound a bit fuller. drums seems a tad to dry. maybe some more percussion work would fill out the breaks better. piano melody is nice, almost sounds a little offkey in some spots.
overall it's not too shabby, just don't think it's quite final yet. still feels like there's work yet to be done.
For now i will put choir from VST.
And the mix is not done yet,i would make better and i will add some new instruments .
Thanks for the feedbacks guys, I appreciate it
Beautiful piano chords. Sound very souly.
You're drum samples are already way better than in your other songs.
I'd make the snare a bit louder. Very chilling.
keep it up mate. Definitely a big improvement from your other tracks
If that don't work,i will change that 
