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djsm
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Please check out my new track 'Dubstyle' and post your comments here!

just a dubstep i made. please review this i need opinions and help i just started dubstep!! Smile
30-10-2010 17:10
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first off all id use a diffrent snare
with more low end, try and layer some more under this one.
for the first dubstep u made this bass is cool.
id distort it a little more and eq it more so the kick wont be pushed back as much
liek the lil break down with the stop voice. might try and find diffrent samples fo that tho.
battle drone has a great article on how to get vocals, also a progrem where u can type a phrase you want to be said, it sounds more human than standard fl robot voiceTongue
overal cool track for your first dubstepSmile

keep it up man!

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31-10-2010 00:27
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Nice amount of reverb on clap. Apart from that everything else needs a lot of work.
31-10-2010 02:21
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the whole track sounds sunken and there is a very loud hiss over the whole thing the only time it stops is when the vocal cuts in and everything else drops out bass sounds ok whole track needs a lot of work

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31-10-2010 09:15
Noisebound Noisebound is a male
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It sounds more like hip hop than dubstep to me. Definitely, track really needs a lot of work. I can say that the structure and idea is pretty good, just don't like that silence in the middle, between vocals. I think you wanted to make the track sound better, and split the main part in two, or three pieces, but silence is a bit too long. You could fill it with some hats or sweep up... (it's only my opinion).

I can barely hear the kick, you should make it punchier and louder, or just turn a volume of the bass down a little. A lot of other stuff needs to be changed too imo.

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31-10-2010 16:18
djsm
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thanks alot Smile any suggestions on good snare vsts? and i cant eq worth crap i dont really know how i have a lot to learn on fl that i have no idea about. and is the battle drone thing like a vst or a user on here?
01-11-2010 23:06
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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Why do you need VST for snares?Just download the snares samples from this site.I use them and they are perfect.Also you can watch tutorials how to make good drum section.
Drums are better from samples, not from vst.
Go up to the Samples Link,and yo will find a lot samples.
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sounds like a dirty hip hop trak like the other dude ses, in which case it needs less work than if it was a d step trak, I quite like the beats but a little mo beef never hurt did it now! anyways u got a good base 2 work from but dont try n make it somin its not imo
07-11-2010 06:25
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