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slide slide is a male
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Please check out my new track 'exorcion' and post your comments here!!!


This track has been deleted. Reason: cleaning up old tracks

This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by slide: 05-07-2004 20:32.

05-07-2004 20:25
Surya Surya is a male
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Dark intro. Reloaded vocals?
99 style bassline kicking in with some soft drums. Sounds quite old skool. Hats could have been a bit phatter, bassline could use a bit less filtering with more mid to make them a tad more agressive.
Quite like the panning stuff that's going on.

Not a bad track, but it sounds like it was made 5 years ago.

Overall sound quality is not that great, work on the EQing a bit more to get stuff more balanced (and with more hi-end).

2.25/5

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11-07-2004 11:59 Homepage of Surya
T.roll T.roll is a male
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I like this one a lot. Thi is my style tune with softly changing repetative strucure. BUT i have a feeling
you have not bothered mastering it at all. By default thre are no mid and high ranges. Do you mind if i upload a bit more equed version of your track (20 minutes working in Sound forge)? Couldn't fix all problems but imo it sounds a lot better.
To the track:
Paning is very nice, especially in headphones. Smile
Like a bit dissonanced lead. Bass is ok but a little clipin occures. Also the rest of samples are not hi end quality. Voical is cool, where is it from? Pad that strat's from about 2:10 is quite old, but it fits the main idea, so it's ok. Agree with Surya about mid freq's indeed they are required. Try to put additions snare or tom's/conga's.
And hey! i want to make a remix on it! What do you say? Cool

RATE: 4 for idea and structure, 1 for sample quality and eqing = 3

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12-07-2004 21:01
slide slide is a male
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tnx guys.....my nex tune will be better(hope so)Smile ....
and i agree with you..... this is prity slopy and i didn't do all the stuff i wanted (lose the rns file while formating the disc).....

and remix....sounds like a good idea.....try to do something and let mi know when you'r done...... Bigup

cheers
14-07-2004 16:56
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Urm... Actually a expected some original samples from you to make a remix... Big Grin BTW What software are you using? And how about uploading a mastered version wich i made (could send you somehow so you listen it)?

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14-07-2004 17:50
slide slide is a male
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you mastered it? great... you can send it to my mail..
slid0@yahoo.com (in slid0 ''0'' is zero- people have problem with that, send mail to wrong adres....)
yahoo has 100mb space for mail so i think that you wont have a problem...... Bigup

about software......i use reason 2.5 and combine it with cooledit.......

for samples you shold give me few days becouse the tune is old abouth 6 months and i formated my comp for a few times...... i need time to find all samples......

not shure that i will find all but i'll try.....

cheers....
15-07-2004 02:49
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