 Azlateen - A Little Goes A Long Way |
Azlateen 
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Registration Date: 18-06-2009
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Please check out my new track 'A Little Goes A Long Way' and post your comments here!
Well, to be honest, i wasn't sure about uploading this tune here, but i thought i'd take my chances with it, see what happens. Lemme know what you think, I love all constructive criticism.
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29-10-2010 12:14 |
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Noisebound
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Registration Date: 26-05-2010
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Hey, so what can I say about this track...it's a combination of hard (piano, bass) and bright, "happy" stuff 
This track is unique with it's style, maybe a bit similar to rock and it's quite hard to comment it. I think the snare doesn't fit this track perfectly, I would use a deeper snare with a quiet little "clap" at the end, and also, punchier and louder kick. Hats are good. I like how you combinated strings with piano and synth in the middle. You could use some ambient background sounds, FX, some noise for transitions, because sometimes it sounds very simple. But the track is nice overall, it's some good job you've done here. Keep it up 
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29-10-2010 17:48 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Goth rock band, not DnB.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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29-10-2010 19:52 |
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optikal_assassin
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Registration Date: 18-07-2005
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definitely not something i was really expecting. i can tell you were trying to make it sound drum n' bass, but just doesn't quite hit right with me. not really sure how to comment on this track, but it's cool you're trying something different.
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29-10-2010 21:55 |
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Azlateen
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Registration Date: 18-06-2009
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Noisebound, thanks for your feedback. I was afraid of putting too much in already, but since you say more could be put in certain areas, more is going in lol
No idea how goth rock came around major chords...
I probably should have mentioned that i was going for a world kind of fusion with the sitar playing along with a simple lead synth. there's a million different styles on this site and switching back and forth plays it hard on the brain cause it's used to one style and to suddenly go from night and day is rough. s'all good though, i ain't really worried about it lol
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29-10-2010 22:32 |
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pusha
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goth rock lol seriously tho this isnt dnb i can see where u have tryed to make it dnb tho put this one to onee side and start another one and learn from mistakes i will vote accordingly though as your sound seems to be coming through fairly ok just the arrangement and actuall synths used are kind of way off
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29-10-2010 23:31 |
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fogboy
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production seems all good. tune reminds me of an early 90s video game (which is cool). Definitely doesnt have a drum and bass feel to it though.
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30-10-2010 12:33 |
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fogboy
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production seems all good. tune reminds me of an early 90s video game (which is cool). Definitely doesnt have a drum and bass feel to it though.
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30-10-2010 12:33 |
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hellnegative
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Registration Date: 02-08-2009
Posts: 39
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Any track with piano in it is usually pretty win in my book. This track does need a lot of work tho. I like where it could go but as of now it reminds me of something cheesy from the n64 days. Fatten that bassline, amp up the drums, make those melodies sound more adult, and keep the piano, but use a diff synth. What software are you using? A full rework would be amazing to see. You have an ear for melody. I still look forward to seeing you post more tracks soon.
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30-10-2010 14:27 |
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djsm
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i think this is a very different track! but i like it a lot. its very different from anything i have ever heard. it's very catchy and easy to listen to. i like all the effects and the beats very very good too. i dont think i have ever heard a beat of this style before.The main effect sounds very bubble and then all the other effects are used very well with the beat.by far though its a very good beat keep up the good work and keep making these beats. i like them very much. good work. awesome beats. great style
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30-10-2010 17:05 |
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amptek
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I like the chord progression on the intro and how it all started out but the sound reminds me of a video game or rather an MMORPG like Ragnarok. ITS NOT A BAD THING! I found it very easy to listen to and it brought me back to some old days when i used to play MMO's
Your title kinda explains my little flash back as it states "A Little Goes A Long Way" and it was true! It brought me back 8-9 years!
Keep up the work!
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