The reverb on the intro is too big imo. The sub that joins in around 25s is really cool though! You're drums aren't rolling like your previous was so I'd say, add some long extra hat.
When you start playing chords of the beginning synth it sounds a bit offkey with the other melodies that join in. Fix that.
Also your drums could use some more variation.
At 1:48 don't overuse your kickdrums. Things like that are cool to do with jungle drums but these don't really sound that jungly so doesn't quite fit.
The melodies lack some variation imo and you could use a lot more effects and synths. It's a bit empty at some points.
The coolest thing about this song is the sub. The sub's really nice in the mix, I think.
That's about all, keep doing your thing and listen a lot to your favorite producer. You're improving.
agree with battledron on this one it could almost be a band nice try for something different and it sounds fairly well mixed down just a bit confused try and glue it all together a bit more drum n bass/ jungly and i think it would sound better
Yeah i agree, but allways i try to make more variations on my tunes.Even mix with more styles and genres.
I had a period with low inspiration, then i start to force to make music ( this tune is forced).Thats way the first part of this tune is boring i is too long,then i move the tune with the break beats.
Second part for me is 5*,Because i add piano and violins and all of them together sound perfect.I even add piano solo, then after piano the violins are with solo.
Thanks for the feedbacks i really appreciate it
well right off the bat im not big on that synth used in the intro. a bit ear piercing at high volumes, especially on phones. drums sound kinda empty, i hate to use this term, but almost generic sounding. i just think it would do better with better eq'ing and more percussions added in the mix to give it some more flow rather than the static k---s------k-s--- beat.
i think things kinda took a bad turn right about 55 seconds. the synth you introduced just sounds way out of tune to the rest of the mix. almost like two different songs playing at the same time.
i guess it started shaping up later in the track, but the sounds you're using here just aren't mixing well. can't really pinpoint what to be exact, my ears just don't feel it. the crazy piano bizzness towards the later half was pretty slick though. was that done on a keyboard?
it's a good attempt, just quite different for me is all.
