 den_bert - Alien Control |
den_bert
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Please check out my new track 'Alien Control' and post your comments here!
Been very busy lately. Didnt have much time to make tunes. But Im pretty happy with this tune so far. Sub focus style dance floor dnb 
. Enjoy!
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17-10-2010 18:08 |
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Glodaragz 
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Registration Date: 26-06-2009
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Nice intro,love the sync, i'm interested how did u get that sound? Nice drums work,the hats are great and the snare too.Also loving ur background sounds.But you need more changes and more variations on the drums and the melody too.Otherwise the tune is nice 
3.7/5
Big ups
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17-10-2010 18:48 |
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optikal_assassin
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pretty cool concept. slightly different than what i've been used to hearing, which is is a good thing. drum variations aren't really that bad considering how short the track is. i think had you tacked another minute or 2 onto the track, then maybe more variations in drums would be good, but it's fine to me as is. i think it could use a changeup in the synth lines more often though. not too much , just maybe some different melodies. other than some minor things, it's actually a pretty solid track as far as i am concerned. definitely different as i've said. good work. 
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17-10-2010 23:24 |
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ksd
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this is really Subfocus style..good job mate..
nice vocal sample..cartman rules!!
the drums could be a bit punchyer and maybe add some movement to your mid bass..
anyway..party tune!
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18-10-2010 14:16 |
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den_bert
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Thanx for the replies!
The version I uploaded had a lead sound playing in the beginning that REALLY didnt belonged there 
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I added more variation and added some more weight to the snare, you can check it out here:
http://soundcloud.com/collaborationdnb
Big up 
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18-10-2010 22:11 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Needs a couple of extra melodies to get to the level of sub focus.. he's quite a wizard when it comes down to that.
Good work!
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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18-10-2010 22:35 |
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Glodaragz
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Now that is this is better version
But i agree with BattleDrone.
And maybe you should put some effects on the main melody...
i really like it.When u will make the full version i would like to have copy of this tune, Hope thats not a problem.
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19-10-2010 00:52 |
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pusha
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nice track but well repeative mate
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buy the ticket take the ride
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19-10-2010 19:26 |
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