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D2o D2o is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Creature (clip)' and post your comments here!


Hello .be!

Been a while since I uploaded anything upon this fine site so I thought i'd upload a lil clip of something I'm working on at the minute.

Little bit stuck with it at the minute so any ideas are greatly welcome!

As always made entirely in Reason 5.0

I will endeavour to do some over due reviews!

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by D2o: 15-10-2010 13:21.

15-10-2010 10:25 Homepage of D2o
m-ej m-ej is a male
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yeah its been way too long since we've heard any jimmy c vibes m8.

beats real nice.
nice bit of twisty bass going on Smile
although im not sure the octave down section works for me.
real good fx in use here.
peace as usual bro.

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15-10-2010 11:56
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Nice flavour like the sounds and bass all working well together. Major FX and sweeps needed imo, really to introduce the drop and build tension on the breaks. (My time saving reason tip is to copy an fx 'track and device' from a previous reason tune and paste it into your current file. Then mess with octaves etc to make the fx sound different)A good effort maybe add a vocal sample or two as well.
15-10-2010 12:02
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Very well made but a bit repetitive in the end. Maybe add some other basses and/or filtering to keep things more dynamic?

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15-10-2010 14:24 Homepage of BattleDrone
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very clean and pro sounding - great use of effects
i reckon it needs a bit of a vocal sample or just something to add a lil spice.

i may be wrong but i dont think the key change bit at 0:44 works - i'd prefer to either hear the same riff repeated as before , or a slightly different pattern.

great clip - look forward to hearing the 'fully when its finished!
15-10-2010 16:29
optikal_assassin optikal_assassin is a male
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damn bro, didn't even know you changed up your name. i been gone for so long i musta missed the changeup. only way i recognized you was the avatar you had lol. anyhow, i know that feeling man of being out of writing for so long then trying to come back with something good. it's hard sometimes.

to the track though, it's on a good path to being something. it's got a nice hype feeling to it, just it seems to be lacking. almost like it feels rather empty. kinda hard to explain what exactly i'm saying. i would feel using an amped up break like that, you could do with some more sounds to fill in the empty spaces of the spectrum. i think it would do great with some more cymbal work, maybe some crash cymbals or some ride cymbals. just seems it would fit.

yeah, a bit repetitive towards the end, kinda like you were rolling good, then ran dry of inspiration. a dead end of ideas.

i'll kinda back up what waw waw said, about needing some fx and sweeps, but that kinda goes back to what i was saying about needing more to fill this out, and make it sound really crazy, more sfx.

it's a good start bro, well on it's way to being a bomb track, just gotta break that barrier and work that shit. keep it going and please get the final version. i'd love to hear which direction you take this. Bigup

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15-10-2010 21:46
jeffijoe jeffijoe is a male
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Nice drums, heard em before though, maybe thats just me. Like the modulation, but kind of repetitive, but I really shouldnt be the one to tell you that, LOL! Tongue

But yeah man, nice track overall. Smile

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16-10-2010 14:07 Homepage of jeffijoe
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Not too keen on the main bass sound - the one coming in at 1:06 sounds much better to me.
Drums are absolutely top notch, nothing to complain about there.

Keep at it, it's got loads of potential.

Also, glad to see you uploading again sir Big Grin Bigup

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Puzzle: 17-10-2010 02:52.

17-10-2010 02:41 Homepage of Puzzle
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love the drop, simple yet effective.
bass sounds nice and evil.
second bass that kicks in sounds better though
break sounds good
its a bit empty atm maybe, some back groundy high synth would begreat in this, keep it evil tho!
i would love to hear the finished "creature" Big Grin

good tuneBig Grin

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17-10-2010 04:04
Ketz Ketz is a male
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ez mate, lovin those lfo edit bits on the bass, slick precision on all of it Big Grin the key change sounds fine to me, i'd maybe just bring it in a tad later.

production is top notch as always, beats are sick as is the mixdown. the bass work is wicked real nice textures and movement

big ups sir! Bigup

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