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Dj-Lowprofile 
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Please check out my new track 'Flight Line' and post your comments here!
this is a new DnB tune that I am working on - Still thinking about the structure. I would like to shorten it but at the same time I love the way it is... I'll have to think about it - Feedback appreciated. ez fellas
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07-10-2010 05:01 |
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Impact
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Nice intro!
First 10 seconds are ace!!
Not keen on the synth @ 11 seconds.. sounds too 'cheap' compared to the other sounds you have going on.
1st drop: wow loads of stuff kicking off..
Kick could be a little heavier and deeper?
Drums sounds pretty snappy.
Like the layered approach you've taken.
Synth loop @ 58secs (danny byrd?) seems a tad out of place.
2nd drop @ 1:19 is great 
B-line is very nice!
Structure/arrangement seems a little rushed.. lots of (cool) ideas all rammed together with not a lot of time to let each 'section' start, grow and ebb.
Might want to look at the phrasing.
Bad boy amens seem to work well- takes the tune from a contemporary dnb song to a jungle hybrid.
Yet another synth(arp) layer @ 2:50
Again sounds cool enough, just seems to clash a bit.
Pad needs a little more delay/verb imho. Seems very dry.
Guitar loop is great!
4:40 is very nice- more like this please!
Drop @ 5:00 could be fiercer- amens need a lot of EQ work to make em punch!
Seriously- sounds to me like you have at least three tunes buried in there!
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07-10-2010 09:07 |
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BattleDrone
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Mixdown & mastering needs work (stereo, compression, EQ).
The basses really sound Lo-Fi.
You really should shorten this to 5-6 minutes.
It's pretty repetitive at some points so it can be done.
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07-10-2010 10:10 |
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Agree with Impact - 'sounds to me like you have at least three tunes buried in there!'
Although I think if you took a couple of the main ideas and put more of an emphasis on building up to drops it could work really well.
Like the amen beat... but think layering more kicks/snares could help fatten it up (especially the snare, making the attack really 'slappy' would suit what you have going on here).
To be honest the intro sounded like more of an IDM sort of tune, which I like, the synths sound a bit computer game like - but they don't fit to well with the more jungle vibe that comes along.
A good idea - definitely some of the b-line sounds (with a bit of beefing up) could be great dancefloor smashers! Just lacks coherence overall.
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07-10-2010 11:36 |
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pusha
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kool track man
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09-10-2010 10:58 |
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thesiskin
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muted wah guitar
lead at the beginning sounds like it needs to be softened slightly -
nice bass at 1:20
lead at 1:33 comes in ace and the following breaks are cool
2:06 - jungle stylie! really like the dark oldskool feel to this section and at 5:04
kicks ass again later with the vocal samples on top - nice.
from 0:00 to 0:30 i wasn't sure if i would like this tune - but as it progressed it kept treatin me sounds i like!
i really enjoyed this tune - but if you trim it, dont edit out the vocal sample section - cos i think that adds extra spice theres nuttin wrong with a 10 minute tune in this game!
i'd like get loops or single hits of the tight sounding 'jungle' style breakbeats - but i can never find them - apart from the original amen break !
a good 'un!
ez.
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09-10-2010 15:34 |
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GdZ
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Registration Date: 13-10-2010
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i think that wud be raelly nice liquid tune if u added some subbass to go with synths on begining .nice breaks and pauses .keep on with it man play around withh basslines cuz after while they sound all the same and get kinda boring
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13-10-2010 17:11 |
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