Nick!, sounds very professional! The only thing that I don't really like is the intro vocal with the pitch bend on it and I think you're guitar chords are a bit too "happy" for this song because I've got the impression that you switch your track each 2mins.
Still like it (especially your intro is very cool!)
But don't like it as much as Believe.
love the song and chords... very catchy.. good stuff!!
I don't like the pitch shifting @ 1:17 it doesn't really fit, at least at the rate that you do it. but then when I heard it again at 3:27 & 5:14 it was easier to hear.... so I would say somehow ease into it @ 1:17 without the synth underneath...or just something so its not so chromatic...which is jarring given this catchy tune which is so tonally centered..
another nice hart'y track in progress here
you could go down the danny byrd autotune route on the vocal,
(over used i know m
instead of pitch shift,
i think that would sound pretty cool with this happy upfront vibe.
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nice one additive! very professional sounding track for sure. only thing that tripped me up was that pitch bend. seems like it just radically changed the overall feel of the track once it dropped with that pitch bend. not bad, just took a second to adjust to the change.
not sure i was big on that pitch work done around the 5:20 mark and after. just a personal .02.
i would have liked a little deeper bass to really rock this mutha as well. has a nice dance feel to it, just gotta have some harder bass to really put me in the right groove. the bass is there, just sounds like you got a lot of space to play with it more. overall though, you're definitely onto something BIG here. i think going back and doing some extra work could give you a serious professional gem in your hands. respect.
Very nice tune, the instruments used fit well, the pitched vox is a little odd, but not a devastating blow for the tune. Like this tune, good work on the guitars, they are in time. Tell Tawny she did well! Later brutha.
instead of pitch shift,
