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BattleDrone 
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Sweet... with every track you make you improve.
Could do with a few vocal bits here and there to give it that extra bit. Love the filtered-drum-breakdown at 3', sounds really really good.
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03-10-2010 14:02 |
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Puzzle
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03-10-2010 14:49 |
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tryptech
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03-10-2010 15:01 |
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thesiskin
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nice breathy 'skippy' intro
good solid drums - theres some really decent packs on this site - ideal for mods - i might hijack that technique!
the jingle effect is cool
the wah that comes in at 1:08 adds some nice dirt
nice gentle key melody to left headphone
steppy sounding samples make things interesting
sounds like it might need a tiny bit more bass - but my ears are still under instruction so i may well be wrong.
i enjoyed listening to this - a good'un!
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03-10-2010 16:18 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Bigup Puzzle & Trytech...
That's a killer snare in that break dudes!
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03-10-2010 23:12 |
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m-ej
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v v v nice 
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04-10-2010 08:51 |
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BBear
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Nice one TT.
Drums are tight as a 12-year old.
Drum samples are excellent, I especially like the snare!
Tune has a nice vibe.
Bass is great, nice and deep.
Maybe place the piano a little bit more upfront in the mix, not much tho. Apart from that I think the mixdown is excellent, everything fits nicely.
Great job on this one, I enjoyed it!
Maybe try finding a nice subtle vocal and this is top notch!
Big up!
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04-10-2010 20:07 |
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DJDemonking
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I like this track a lot. Although I would like to hear more variation. The snare sounds awesome...
at 3:00 I love the filter, but its a little abrupt... wouldn't mind easing into that, or crashing or something...this is more just my personal preference.
there are a lot of great texture sounds in there... sounded really original to me.
I'm not crazy about the end...seems unfinished or something.
good job tho!
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04-10-2010 22:08 |
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Nick ZZ
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05-10-2010 09:15 |
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Impact
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07-10-2010 09:24 |
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Really like the intro, lovely sounds/samples here.
Could maybe to with just a little bit more attack on the snare, or another layered over it. Interesting panning on the bass in conjunction with the other sounds going on, at first I wasn't sure about it, but it kinda works - maybe if the sounds on the right side where a bit louder it would feel more balanced. Love this little melody in the back round on the left pan though.
Overall track has a really nice flow, and the breakdown works perfectly - really, really like how the bass come back in there. All I can spot technically is maybe a bit more high end to the drums/hats and some overall EQ/mastering to pump everything up a bit and make it crispier.
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07-10-2010 11:48 |
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optikal_assassin
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not bad at all. honestly, think i might have to peek at that puzzle break. does sound good.
well, to be honest, the tune itself sounds good, but somehow the wah-wah-wah synth sound kinda grates on my nerves a little bit. it's not a bad sound, i just think maybe it was used too much in one spot and too up front.
once you broke thing sup at 3:00 minutes though and came back in with the breaks again, things sounded much better to me. sorry, it was just that one synth. kinda like impact said though, the track time flew by listening. so thats a good thing though.
now, i would agree it needs more variation in sounds besides the wah-wah sound. not sure right off the top of my head what sounds would suit this track proper, it would be more a matter of what sounds good to you. just more of something different.
outro as demonking said is a bit abrupt. i'd find a little bit of a more interesting way to finish it out. all in all though, it's definitely not that bad. just some minor things that annoyed me. no biggie. it's got potential to be big, just gotta work it. 
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10-10-2010 04:28 |
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Pherro
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Some very interesting building of sounds here, as demonstrated especially in the first few seconds.
I hear lots of LFO'ing going on, maybe a bit too much, but that's ok.
Now the drums. Personally, I understand it's fun to take a preset break and mix it up a bit, but I've never been a big fan of it, and that's probably just my bad.
In this case, the drum patterns could use a little mix up imo.
The mastering is good enough for my standards, and would probably sound good on a big system.
All in all, a very decent track, but it could use a little more variation in the drums. I love the melodies though!
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12-10-2010 17:16 |
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Tonedef
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19-10-2010 17:50 |
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amptek
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I've always admired your improvement in between you tracks you've been making and sending me to review haha. This one has that sound you were looking for as well as your last track you posted.
Good sound overall and what more can I really say. Your structure and use of layers is just right.
Keep it up and add some vocals maybe? Even with out it it works fine
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22-10-2010 21:44 |
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eurk0
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the atmo is pretty sweet, but im not sure about the bass. i dont get its tempo. maybe its just me. anyway the synths pads and atmo sounds make it up 
drums are sounding nice too.
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