 miki - dovidenia (goodbye) |
Surya 
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Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Intro is nice with the percussion going on.
Bassline is good, but not very original.
Drums are OK, but nothing spectacular.
The filtered sawpad is out of key though, sounds not very good.
You use a lot of things that have been done before, but better, and the fact that your melodies are out of key doesn't really help the track. It's also very repetetive, and although it's only 4 minutes, it's a bit boring.
Sorry, but not very good. Not really bad either though. Just let thisone alone, and move on to the next one.
1.5/5
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01-07-2004 11:30 |
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Fenye
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Registration Date: 21-06-2003
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For me track is fresh enough.
Pulsating...
I'ld like to say "uvidime sa!"
The summer will go away... 
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11-07-2004 11:42 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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It sounds a bit bland, doesn't have any balls or bite, like it's made with a japanese GM synth. Especially the finger bass with the long release time lacks the oomph that a good bass line should give. Try using some other sounds...
You've put quite a lot of elements in, there are some good ideas, but you need to practise some more, and listen to the stuff that others make, and try to analyse how it is done.
What are you using to make your tracks?
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27-08-2004 01:34 |
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miki
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Registration Date: 10-06-2004
Posts: 63
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just reason, why?
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27-08-2004 14:21 |
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upreal
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Registration Date: 29-05-2007
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I liked it overall, however the drums did not make the impact one would expect. Keep up the good work!
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06-06-2007 20:46 |
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rodi
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Registration Date: 25-03-2007
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the synthy kinda bass sounds too primitive for a great track
the drums are good in my oppinion
The build up needs work , and by that i mean making it more interesting and ofcourse u need to change that bass and make several variations of it
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