Big improvement from your other tracks!
drum sounds very good, imo! Maybe find some better samples, but the drum programming is very good.
You've got one asian sounding synth that plays along for the entire song, If I were you, I would make less use of that because it gets a bit boring after a while.
Sometimes things sound off-key in this song. Make sure you got that!
also, ditch the flanger on your reese bass and make the reese less high passed. I miss a deep bass in this song.
But you've made many improvements.
Keep doing your thing
Thanks mate,u don't her the sub bass because bad mixing and player combo
I have to make better mix,also i'll cut some sec from first part,i agree gets boring.Also with changing a few notes in that arabic melody (the bell) would make this tune more interesting
either you or simage has left a vote with an overall ranking of 1 on my new choon with no review this is not helpfull not saying it is you if not its deffinately simage can you please let me know if it was you i won't be pissed just want to know as there has been some one on here for a while giving bad votes with no reviews and i want to know who it is .cheers will review song soon
dont worry i know who it is now as i checked voting register this mornin as i did a lot of votes today as iv been on holiday and i can see that u have not voted how ever i i see simage has voted twice today ie my track and your track you should be ashamed simage i know you have been on here for a while giving low votes with no review or reason why i will adjust my votes for your track accordingly now and i suggest any one else who got a rubbish vote lately ie 0!!! for overall production that is harmfull to this site ......sorry for littering your review page glodaragz
wtf! Pusha I haven't voted on your track yet and I got 2 times all 1's on every aspect of my song.
Everybody has the same problem and I can assure you, I didn't do it, because It's pathetic and why would I possibly do that with my own track
deffo not me,probablly guest vote or something like that,im using virtual keyboard so i don't left feedbacks,and i don't vote if i don't write comment.
in the intro those high bleepted synths come in
some notes sound really out of key, have a cool idea going there though.
bass sounds smooth! lovely
that snare could use some more high end for some snappy sounding goodness.
work a lil on those plucky synths and u got urself a nice tune
At exactly 0:15 things start to go wrong. Those melodies don't bring the right vibe. The pads and the lead are very similar frequency-wise which doesn't help to make the tune work. Drums are to much in the back of the mix because the other stuff is WAY too loud. Tune gets pretty repetitive.
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I like this scale. Sounds needs more layering and automation. Double up that lead in the intro and try to off time some things for a more grooving feel. I can hear this is made in Reason am I right? Drums sound a little overcompressed or just not crisp/tight enough. Cool change at 1:55. Overall a good concept but needs a couple more hours of automation/layering and mixing! Keep at it!
Originally posted by Dethworm
I like this scale. Sounds needs more layering and automation. Double up that lead in the intro and try to off time some things for a more grooving feel. I can hear this is made in Reason am I right? Drums sound a little overcompressed or just not crisp/tight enough. Cool change at 1:55. Overall a good concept but needs a couple more hours of automation/layering and mixing! Keep at it!
Thanks for all of you who spent few minutes to hear my tune, and for that lovely advice
Btw Dethworm-no,I made this tune on Fl studio
like all the tunes i made
I agree with Simage. I like the drum programming, the asian synth is a nice idea but some notes are off-key, as mentioned above. And I agree that it get's a bit to repetitive. Work on some variation and the mastering and you have a nice tune.
Harmony wise this track is sound - I think that the main thing that lets this track is not the melodies (feeling the oriental vibe btw) but the sounds of the synths - I'd probably reconsider some of the settings and maybe process the sounds a bit more.
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Not fully convinced by the pad sound or the melody in the intro, it is not deep enough and has a very artificial sound. The drumz are active, but can use better layering and sounds to make them sharper. I recommend making some more changes to the pad if you are going to use it for the entire tune. After every 16 bars a little change will keep the listener more interested. The tune gets boring before it even starts. Hope my feedback helps ya brutha. Thanks.
Synths can use some good reverb and delay treatment, they sound a little cheezy as they are right not. Drumz can use some layers, snare can use a layer with a little bit of a trail or acient. Later.
This is far from finished tune.
