thelesser - Doggy Style

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thelesser - Doggy Style

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thelesser thelesser is a male

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Please check out my new track 'Doggy Style' and post your comments here!!!

its a litttle unfinished try and ignore the bassline,as it is prototype and just there to make it full,it also kinda sucks a bit,but its early days fer this song

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by TheLesser: 29-06-2004 18:11.

29-06-2004 18:10

T.roll T.roll is a male

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Ineed you need to make changes to bassline.
Very nice drumworks! Like that style. Bigup

Waiting until final version.

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29-06-2004 18:43

miki

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I think you can keep bassline. It's fine. And drums are great too. You have really good style.

PS: One thing, song is too short.

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01-07-2004 00:48

Surya

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The wobling bassline is fine, the sub kinda sucks indeed.
Drums are kida OK, but your kick sounds too drumcomputer. Use a more acoustic sounding one.
Wasn't blewn away by the vocal. Sounded a bit like you threw it in becouse you thought it was a cool vocal, not becouse you thought it fitted in there.

2/5

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01-07-2004 11:33

TheLesser TheLesser is a male

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hey thanks for the reviews,in reply to Surya my intention was a drum computer sounding kick in fact pretty much all of it was intentional except the bassline...also,i wrote the song to go with the vocals so i am disappointed there...

cheerz

laters

p.s
(my DnB sucks coz im british! lol)

(edit:i also have discovered that i lost the save file for this song so i cant finish it)

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by TheLesser: 02-07-2004 16:54.

02-07-2004 16:52

thechronic thechronic is a male

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I like the kick but not the snare Big Grin

Difficult to get a lot of contradicting opinions I suppose Big Grin

I'm reviewing all your tracks now to get a feel for your way of producing, and it seems to me that you need to work on your structures. Your tracks have nice ideas, but tend to get boring after a while because there are never any drastic changes throughout the song.

You should make two or three different themes in a song and alternate between them (like in a chorus/verse/chorus pop song Wink

). Also changing the chords would help!

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27-08-2004 00:56

Encypher Encypher is a male

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nice bass bending! drums are way too clutterd tho and the kick just keeps pounding its giving me a headache, interesting choice of sample! cant hear no sub lines if there are any then they need turning right up, try layering the bass over a pure tone, some bass thats JUST bass will add the fullness, of course you wanna cut out the clashing frequencies at this point... if you bother with it!

like that bass bending tho! good efforts

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11-06-2007 20:05

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