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m-ej
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Please check out my new track 'Life Is Too Short.' and post your comments here!
ez dotbe'ers
just some nice generic liquid shizzle from myself.
this got played on stunna's green room show last week
(cheers for the heads up cj m
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i didnt think it would get played so i didnt record the show or chase it up(i am a numpty lol).
it is what it is,
and duz exactly what it says on the tin,
(to coin a phrase).
peace and stuff
mej
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m-ej
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yeah i know about that vocal m8
the f***ing ho will not sit properly.
iv tried everything i know to sort it,
elastic pitch/time stretching/warp markers/transpose/samplers
this is as good as i could get it.
i could go all melodyne or autotune on her ass,
but im kinda sick of the bitch now lolololol
cheers for the comments bruvva
on to the next one then.
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m-ej
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thats a thought m8.
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14-09-2010 10:38 |
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Love the atmosphere...
Some vocal bits are off tone really bad though.
I would suggest to either tune them or leave them out because they really don't do the tune any good.
Drumbuildup in the breakdown could use some work to be more tight.
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14-09-2010 12:11 |
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m-ej
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
I would suggest to either tune them or leave them out because they really don't do the tune any good.
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cheers BD m8.
i'll give melodyne a stab n see if i cant sort her out
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14-09-2010 12:24 |
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m-ej
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@ tryptech.
cheers m8, just a bit more to do to it
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14-09-2010 21:56 |
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nice pad work in the intro. esp. when its just the pad & Vox around 0:45 ... wish the vox were in tune. Why not change the instruments to match the vox if you can't get the vox in key? Seems like an easier fix to me.
Real nice sounding sub. Sounds really full. Nice guitar work too. Might be nice to drop out some of the pads when the guitar comes in so they aren't fighting for space. All around good tune mate. nice 1
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m-ej
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cheers danny
that s a few more things to work on
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15-09-2010 08:07 |
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Listening again, i'd whip off the the first vox Marc... that piano still takes me back
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m-ej
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yeah that's the general consensus stu m8
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15-09-2010 13:04 |
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lovely mate. vocal is crackin, suits the mood really well. would fit in well on a hospital records mix, good work
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m-ej
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cheers boner m8.
just gotta sort out the vocal
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llovely mate
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24-09-2010 14:21 |
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Nice mixdown, The sounds freqs are seperated well. Like the mellodies and the vibe. The drop is off key, I think if you fixed that it would help the tune recover. Z
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30-09-2010 09:27 |
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m-ej
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cheers m8,
back burner job this one.
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30-09-2010 10:24 |
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I realy like this one!
Intro is wicked, nice pads.
Drums are tight, love the sub!
I agree on the vocal-thing tho, just keep the second one. Nice build-up.
Mixdown sounds excellent.
Keep 'em comming!
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30-09-2010 14:48 |
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Drumz in the intro are very flat and lack dynamics. Like the vocals, but think they could have been used a little better. Like the strings. Not to big on the builds. Keep at it.
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