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m-ej m-ej is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Life Is Too Short.' and post your comments here!

ez dotbe'ers Smile
just some nice generic liquid shizzle from myself.
this got played on stunna's green room show last week Smile
(cheers for the heads up cj mCool .
i didnt think it would get played so i didnt record the show or chase it up(i am a numpty lol).
it is what it is,
and duz exactly what it says on the tin,
(to coin a phrase).
peace and stuff
mej
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14-09-2010 09:30
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Like the melody..
Drums are crisp.
Reverb on the keys and vocal is perfect too me.

Still think the main vocal hook, "what are ya gonna do", is slightly off key- (but CP and I have discussed this previously). Secondary vocal sounds bang on to me Smile

LOVE the drop @ 2:00!!!! wasnt expecting that! the guitar works really well..



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14-09-2010 09:49
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yeah i know about that vocal m8 Frown
the f***ing ho will not sit properly.
iv tried everything i know to sort it,
elastic pitch/time stretching/warp markers/transpose/samplers
this is as good as i could get it.
i could go all melodyne or autotune on her ass,
but im kinda sick of the bitch now lolololol

cheers for the comments bruvva Smile
on to the next one then.

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14-09-2010 10:28
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I reckon you could get away with losing the primary vocal.
Keep the secondary one that works really well Smile

or not Big Grin

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14-09-2010 10:34
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thats a thought m8.

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Love the atmosphere...
Some vocal bits are off tone really bad though.
I would suggest to either tune them or leave them out because they really don't do the tune any good.
Drumbuildup in the breakdown could use some work to be more tight.

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I would suggest to either tune them or leave them out because they really don't do the tune any good.


cheers BD m8.
i'll give melodyne a stab n see if i cant sort her out Smile

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Top notch man

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@ tryptech.
cheers m8, just a bit more to do to it Smile

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nice pad work in the intro. esp. when its just the pad & Vox around 0:45 ... wish the vox were in tune. Why not change the instruments to match the vox if you can't get the vox in key? Seems like an easier fix to me.

Real nice sounding sub. Sounds really full. Nice guitar work too. Might be nice to drop out some of the pads when the guitar comes in so they aren't fighting for space. All around good tune mate. nice 1

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cheers danny Smile
that s a few more things to work on Smile

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Listening again, i'd whip off the the first vox Marc... that piano still takes me back Wink

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yeah that's the general consensus stu m8 Smile

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lovely mate. vocal is crackin, suits the mood really well. would fit in well on a hospital records mix, good work

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cheers boner m8.
just gotta sort out the vocal Smile

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llovely mate

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Nice mixdown, The sounds freqs are seperated well. Like the mellodies and the vibe. The drop is off key, I think if you fixed that it would help the tune recover. Z

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cheers m8,
back burner job this one.

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I realy like this one!
Intro is wicked, nice pads.
Drums are tight, love the sub!
I agree on the vocal-thing tho, just keep the second one. Nice build-up.
Mixdown sounds excellent.

Keep 'em comming!

30-09-2010 14:48
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Drumz in the intro are very flat and lack dynamics. Like the vocals, but think they could have been used a little better. Like the strings. Not to big on the builds. Keep at it.

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