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amptek
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Please check out my new track 'Through The Lights' and post your comments here!
Hey everyone,
Here's another mood developed track. Please let me know what you guys think.
It seems to be finished but my friends say that it's lacking a few things. Maybe a mild vocal added to it or something.
Enjoy!
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06-09-2010 21:36 |
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BattleDrone
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A vocal and some tearing basses here and there would do good... Some FX automation (filtering etc) could help to warm it all up a bit.
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07-09-2010 00:42 |
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tryptech
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Very good sound man, you're awesome, you're like four weeks in production, great. Love that babylike sample. Nice melodies man.
Good sub
Just add somee high hats some more high end drumming.
Love it man
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07-09-2010 01:48 |
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amptek
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Thanks BD and Tryp, I will definitely look into some sort of vocal line and get some more bass going.
I think because the limit of my music program, It's hard to add that true feel to what i'm really wanting to produce. As a garageband user I do my best to use what's given me.
I do appreciate the feedback and soon, once I get my comp upgraded and Logic i'll be on my way to getting the sound I want
Thanks for tuning in!
Amp
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07-09-2010 09:03 |
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comment left on S/C m8.
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07-09-2010 09:17 |
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awesome, crystal clear and chilled (: love the bass!
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08-09-2010 12:18 |
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nice intro... definitely a moody track. I'm not totally sold on your kick to be honest, might need a bit more low end. Love the piano esp. w/ the delay. Sub sounds good. I like the change up around 2:30 & again at 3:15 - that's an awesome little breakbeat style bridge. Overall, like the mood, keys are nice, might need some mixing help tho, the keys are a little loud relative to everything else so it gets a little noisy from time to time. But good smooth tune indeed.
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08-09-2010 16:00 |
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amptek
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Thanks guys for the kind words. Yeah the kick was a bit too plain but it does sound different from the project file to the mp3 which is weird haha.
I'm re-editing the track with all the feedback i've gotten so far and hopefully it all comes together a bit better.
Thanks again!
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08-09-2010 18:24 |
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good vibes, kik needs more bottom end, which i think detracts from the sub bass, a vocal here and there would be nice, and maybe some synth variation, basics are there, just needs refinig.
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09-09-2010 13:09 |
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amptek
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Thanks for the comments GB. I'm actually working on it at the moment but i'm a bit stuck. I may just wait until I upgrade my laptop and upgrade my program to Logic.
Also, i'm getting an Akai MPK49 so that will make it easier for me to come up with more melody/synth ideas
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09-09-2010 18:30 |
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Impact
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liked the rain/thunder fx in the intro..
keys could maybe have greater image?
as soon as the drums start, the verb kicks in.. maybe apply that to the keys at the start.
Like the bass- rollin!
drums themselves sound a bit light and fluffy in the mix... snare hasnt got much bite and the kick doesnt emit enough punch (imo!)
breakdown @ 3min is different.. the keys riff gets repetitive a bit seeing as you used it in the phrase before the breakdown and it just loops.
love the extra synth layer at 4:10
(would have liked a bit of this in the breakdown)
overall mate- pretty tasty! I really enjoyed listening to it.
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13-09-2010 21:37 |
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amptek
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Hey Thanks Impact! I'm taking all of your tips and actually re-working this tune. So far so good.
Update:
Kick has a more punch to it and a bit more low end to it.
Snare is a bit louder more crisp
Melody
- Added a piano riff
- switched around some riffs to make breakdown better (Thanks Impact)
- added a second bass line with minimal wobble effect (thanks BD)
Updated tune soon to come stay tuned!!
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16-09-2010 02:14 |
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nice ambient vibe to it like it alot
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24-09-2010 14:06 |
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