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Please check out my new track 'Change Me' and post your comments here!!!


ummm just some more trial bizness...
short and simple.

This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Error: 25-06-2004 23:31.

25-06-2004 23:29
Surya Surya is a male
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Wobling clownstep bassline. Would be nice if that bassline had a sub itself, instead of having a different sub layered under it...
Amen is done nicely but could use some more crispness, and maybe more body in the kick... Layering could help.

You defo need a second theme, since thisone gets boring after two minutes, and the track goes on for twice as long.

Vocal is overused a bit too...

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Hi man.
I like the idea of a track but,

1. You need more powerfull basedrum and snare 'cause your
drums sounds just like ready loops.

2. Too much of this vocal sample. Bring some variatons.

3. Needs more 70-80Hz freqs

4. Structure needs variations also.

Needs a lot of work on it, but could become a good tune.

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Needs an overtune, drums are fairly heavy but not sure bout the bass kicks at the end of the bars - not heavy enough. Vocals im not sure bout, whether you have filtered them etc.. dont sound to hot, a fair effor tho
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lol this songs from 2004.

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