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csel 
Producer
Registration Date: 07-08-2010
Posts: 61
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Please check out my new track 'Frostbite' and post your comments here!
A track which found its dead end... i went completely blank on this one... comment please.
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visit my soundcloud y'all http://soundcloud.com/csel
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24-08-2010 17:15 |
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ksd
Producer
Registration Date: 27-10-2009
Posts: 74
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wow, nice first part of the intro with the stereo delay...the rest of the track is really relaxed but monotonous..some echoed fx, variations in the high end and maybe some reversed hats or stuff like that would help to keep it more interesting...just like "little surprises" without over do it, cause it has nice minimal - ambient touch to it..
cheers
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24-08-2010 18:10 |
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goonybag
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 12-11-2006
Posts: 349
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intro has good suspense, builds up well, the first drop around 1 min seems a little bare, i think it needs a bass in there to fill it out, moves along well in a minimal type way which is good, im hearing a nice reece type bass with a solid sub layer in my head which i think will fill it out nicely. Not too nasty, just nice n easy to compliment what you have allready done.
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25-08-2010 12:33 |
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Akada
unregistered
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Like what u have in here pads synth fx etc.... needs to build and then switch to a bass section something related and catchy. It's like it never really drops into anything and is all build up. The low sub is ok for intro use. What u have is good with a nice atmosphere created keep at it and write a nasty drop.
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25-08-2010 14:19 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Drums need some more action or the bassline should go somewhere. It's just "drifting" along now, almost ambient.
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 Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there)
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25-08-2010 14:35 |
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