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Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Trailer Park Side Of The Moon (final)' and post your comments here!

Another dubstepish track.

Done some more tweaking and this is as final as it will get i think. Always appreciate your feedback anyway.

Please let me know if there are any frequency issues, still trying to figure out my monitors/room.

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19-08-2010 16:53 Homepage of Dubrain Hertz
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Hi man, i like yoru melodies and song structure, but the whole thing sounds kind of distorted, havent you put a limite ron the mix cuz think its hitting far above 0dB.
Drums can be tighte rin the mix. Sounds are awesome really sick, especiallu around 4 10 that hig pitched melody
is sick, i can seer people go crazy on it. Just work little on the mixdown.
greetz

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20-08-2010 01:37 Homepage of tryptech
csel csel is a male
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I think the bass overshadowed the drums a lot... and i think you should use panning a lot on this track. It sounded so mono to me... the subs are okay though... but hey.. its just an opinon.

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20-08-2010 13:30
goonybag goonybag is a male
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I like the low fi type intro, the flute? samples seem to have some slight eq issues, somewhere in the mid to highs they are hurting my ears a little. gets going ok, drops need a little more work for more impact. synth work is ok, keeps it going along, overall production I think needs a little workjust to polish it up a little. My thoughts anyway, big up!

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23-08-2010 12:30 Homepage of goonybag
simage
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a very very very WEIRD track! But it definitely has potential if you ask me. I like your style. It's not just mainstream dubstep, it's your own genre and that's what I like in every single one of your tracks. I dig them all. Big up

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24-08-2010 16:20
simage
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a very very very WEIRD track! But it definitely has potential if you ask me. I like your style. It's not just mainstream dubstep, it's your own genre and that's what I like in every single one of your tracks. I dig them all. Big up

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24-08-2010 16:22
2clix 2clix is a male
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I can deffo see this being a HUGE hip hop track, with the gangsta melodies in all! the kick is drowned out completely dunno if thats what you were aiming at someone said "lo-fi" sure why not. structure seems ok. you deffo have an original sound to ya, keep spearmentin! peace

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24-08-2010 20:14
Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male
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Thanks for the feedback guys, I guess I'll work some more on it then. Getting the bass and drums together on this properly is a real pain it seems..

@tryptech: weird, cause it has a limiter on it.

@simage and 2clix: thanks!

@csel: actually I like to not use too much panning, sometimes tracks are played on monorigs and that can really screw up a track with a lot of panning going on.

Appreciate the feedback, stay tuned.

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27-08-2010 14:28 Homepage of Dubrain Hertz
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