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csel
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Registration Date: 07-08-2010
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Please check out my new track 'Curve' and post your comments here!
This is my new dubstep (or what ever you want to call this one) music... please give feedback, thanks.
__ visit my soundcloud y'all http://soundcloud.com/csel
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17-08-2010 17:08 |
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BattleDrone
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Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Structure in the intro is a bit chaotic, always keep a dancing crowd in mind when working on the flow... with this structure people will get confused at times.
The beginning has a lot of sharp distorted sounds, it sounds impressive in one way, but not inviting to the listener.
Sound quality/mix/master-wise I have nothing to complain about.
Cut back on distortion, fix your structure, off you go! :-)
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17-08-2010 20:51 |
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goonybag
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kind of agree with battledrone here, although there is a lot of distorted elemnts which sound great, id be inclined to clean it up a little, personally id start with the drums, sounds like those hats are burnin, maybe dry the drums a lot cleaner and leave the rest as is, just as a starting point.
Mate there are some great synth sounds, awesome reece sounds and all round goodness going on, some really good structural work and great melodies. You will no doubt be one to watch. Id be keen to know a little about your production techniques, do you use samples? Or do you make your own synth sounds, cause there dope!
big up.
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18-08-2010 12:53 |
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ryder_ryder
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Registration Date: 15-08-2010
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very original, love the play with sounds, but its not very listenable!
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18-08-2010 23:05 |
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csel
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Registration Date: 07-08-2010
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hye guys... thx for all the tips and advice... this is what i really need rather than any candy-ear-comments. Now that i've notice... im gonna watch my higher frequencies next time.
goonybag; i use fl studio... massive vanguard and harmless for synth and reece some sound effect i create also with the same vsti but some i just use sample ...
thx again guys
__ visit my soundcloud y'all http://soundcloud.com/csel
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18-08-2010 23:22 |
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tryptech
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EXPERIMENTALLLLL
Very good mixdown, love the chaotic feeling, sick bassounds
sometimes there is too much panning on high pitched sounds, too much stereo, i think the bass layering could be more mono imo
vocal fits well, good nice and clear mixdown, and lots of creativity
SUPERB man
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20-08-2010 01:34 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Some nice ideas in here but your drums lack punch. It's nice with some distortion mayhem but it quickly takes the power away from drums, like here.
You could just layer the drums of course, put kicks and snares on top of the old ones until it punches again.
2:14 - Love this part.
I like the sound of this, the song takes a while before it takes shape though, the first half is a bit messy.
Keep it up.
__ Download my album for free/pay what you want http://recordsofthefleshgod.bandcamp.com...years-2002-2005
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