 ksd - Untiteled |
ksd 
Producer
Registration Date: 27-10-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Untiteled' and post your comments here!
Here is a preview of my first dnb production...usually i do play guitar in 2 bands but dnb is my big passion so i decided to give it a try and start to produce a track!
some constructive comment would be appreciated...
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12-08-2010 21:36 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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snare is very week needs more structure to it
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buy the ticket take the ride
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12-08-2010 22:40 |
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csel
Producer
Registration Date: 07-08-2010
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i really like the bass, this is very good track... build up could use a little more intensity in it... but it is nice one
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12-08-2010 22:52 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Not bad for a first one...
Keep them comming!
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13-08-2010 10:47 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
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Insane for a first timer, snare could have little more midd, but is very crispy, mix is tight, man really fokkin insane for a first track.
ps. nice bass engineering
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13-08-2010 12:22 |
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goonybag
Wicked Producer
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the drums in the intro sound like they are suffocated, they need to breathe more, remove the ceiling and let them reach their potential. the bass that drops at 1 min 10 secs or so is dope. it opens out into a real smasher of a track, but sounds like all the "air" has been sucked out of it, sounds really enclosed to me. Other than that, there is some really good stuff going on, so my only complaint is overall production. Otherwise, great elements for sure. For a first, well, there will be more great ones to come from you.
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13-08-2010 14:50 |
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amptek
Jan Amparo
Registration Date: 04-08-2010
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Your intro got me hooked right away with what I think is a bit crusher effect? Or maybe just some crispness to the drums.
As your first track this is good. The melody, bass, and ear candy all fit well together and you build up is very nice. Loving the jungle feel you put in it.
I can't really observe it that well because to me it sounds as if i'm listening to this track being played at a festival 
Good stuff man keep it up!
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14-08-2010 00:33 |
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amptek
Jan Amparo
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Your intro got me hooked right away with what I think is a bit crusher effect? Or maybe just some crispness to the drums.
As your first track this is good. The melody, bass, and ear candy all fit well together and you build up is very nice. Loving the jungle feel you put in it.
I can't really observe it that well because to me it sounds as if i'm listening to this track being played at a festival
Good stuff man keep it up!
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14-08-2010 00:49 |
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ksd
Producer
Registration Date: 27-10-2009
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thank you all for your reviews...i'm working on them!
layered the snare and the kick with another sample and they cut through better now...
took away one compression of the snare so it breaths a bit more and i gave back some bass freq to the bass so that it has some more "air" (if you where refering on that goonybag...or is it about the scooped mids?)
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14-08-2010 11:07 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Nice intro synth. Like a lot =]
Your drums (snare, bass drum) are panning a bit, bit disorientating.
Not to keen on your reese sound (also a bit loud). Very scratchy. But you have some other fantastic sounds going on.
Not bad mate. =]
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15-08-2010 03:11 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Nice intro synth. Like a lot =]
Your drums (snare, bass drum) are panning a bit, bit disorientating.
Not to keen on your reese sound (also a bit loud). Very scratchy. But you have some other fantastic sounds going on.
Not bad mate. =]
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15-08-2010 03:11 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Nice intro synth. Like a lot =]
Your drums (snare, bass drum) are panning a bit, bit disorientating.
Not to keen on your reese sound (also a bit loud). Very scratchy. But you have some other fantastic sounds going on.
Not bad mate. =]
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15-08-2010 03:12 |
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ryder_ryder
Tourist
Registration Date: 15-08-2010
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build up is great, you need a nice longish build up for mixing tracks, samples are great. nice double drop!!
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18-08-2010 23:10 |
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