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Dj-Lowprofile Dj-Lowprofile is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Encore' and post your comments here!

This is a Dnb tune I am working on right now - I'm kinda stuck on what to do with the second drop - sorry there isn't one - Hope y'all enjoy the preview - I'll post the finnished vesion when its ready. ez
08-08-2010 04:38
goonybag goonybag is a male
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nice mellow vibes in the intro, summer feel which is nice cause its winter here. drums are sweeet, nice kik and snare, lovely breaks. the synth at 1 min 10 is wicked! I like where this has taken a turn, although the drums here sit back a little too far. oh yeh, 1 min 50 secs is fucking awesome, mate, this is a seriously good tune you got goin on here, very pro, very well constructed with lovely sounds, once this is finished I would not be surprised if it gets a release. Seriously good tune.

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08-08-2010 09:29 Homepage of goonybag
Zoo
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beautiful! very pretty good drum, travels great. There are problems in the melody, the structure made good, a bit too ambient for my taste, but personal, mixing is really well done. I like it. I entered at 1:56 with a nice bass but one of my opinione.sorry for my bad EnglishSmile
08-08-2010 14:33
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cool ideas like the sub bass some of the molodys are a bit cheesy that break is straight outta a sample pack with nothin done to it but it is a good break so i can see why u used it needs a bitta work but its gettin there

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08-08-2010 18:22
PeteSb PeteSb is a male
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A real variety of styles in this one. Intro warms things up nicely, you've made good use of the rubik sample trumpet, at least thats where i grabbed it from lol. Logistics uses the same sample in "further away from me".
The vocal edits are strong in this track, really add to the vibe. I would like to see a bit more variety musically, its a tad predictable. Maybe another edit for the trumpet and rhodes would help engage the listener more.
08-08-2010 21:06
PeteSb PeteSb is a male
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A real variety of styles in this one. Intro warms things up nicely, you've made good use of the rubik sample trumpet, at least thats where i grabbed it from lol. Logistics uses the same sample in "further away from me".
The vocal edits are strong in this track, really add to the vibe. I would like to see a bit more variety musically, its a tad predictable. Maybe another edit for the trumpet and rhodes would help engage the listener more.
08-08-2010 21:06
PeteSb PeteSb is a male
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A real variety of styles in this one. Intro warms things up nicely, you've made good use of the rubik sample trumpet, at least thats where i grabbed it from lol. Logistics uses the same sample in "further away from me".
The vocal edits are strong in this track, really add to the vibe. I would like to see a bit more variety musically, its a tad predictable. Maybe another edit for the trumpet and rhodes would help engage the listener more.
08-08-2010 21:07
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Intro vocal is crackling meaning it clips, is too loud. The rhodes organ clips as well, so it's the combination that clips really bad.

The first drop is a bit weird because the trumpets have created totally different expectations. I think this synth needs atleast a potion of reverb to give it more airy sound like the trumpet.It's the one thing I don't like and would not know how to fix.

The vocoded vocal doesn't fit for me (too techy).
Tune is very entertaining, nicely done.

The second drop should be the same as the first with some edits. Not that I want you to take the easy way out, but the first drop is phat so you could do more of the same.

This tune is potential dynamite when handled correctly.

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08-08-2010 22:37 Homepage of BattleDrone
Shinjuku_Night Shinjuku_Night is a male
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Helloooo thereee Big Grin
i like this track a lot!
the intro was so good and when the dnb starts its getting good, i like thiiiiiiissss
bass is deeb, i like the melodies a lot! groove night! i would like to hear the finished full track

have fun Happy
10-08-2010 00:25
tryptech tryptech is a male
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Nice melodies, great intro, not to found about the vocal rond 3 40, but drop is heavy and nice.
Think ive got same samplepack, nice man

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10-08-2010 00:56 Homepage of tryptech
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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1:56 is fricken SICK!!! Drums have awesome flow

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12-08-2010 00:24
KILLER_FAN KILLER_FAN is a male
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nice wicked intro. really got my attention.
-drums that come next are kinda over compressed.
-i like the synth in the break
-the part before the drop really sounds like you've mixed two songs together
-2 many drum patches for my ears. i think you should've continued with the drum patch from the drop untill the next break. then in the break add that second patch.
-the bass is really nice and warm
-i like you got all these spices that really fill out the song. like the suffled pitched snares, the voices. it's really a nice song and i can see that you've put work innit. i hope to see the finished version

cheers
kf
12-08-2010 20:00
amptek amptek is a male
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grr... i think i double posted sorry.

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14-08-2010 00:39 Homepage of amptek
amptek amptek is a male
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Damn man, the way you put your fills in got me going for sure. The intro piano part is nice but maybe put down the echo just a bit because at first I felt a 1/2 beat coming but there wasn't one but that's just personal preference.

Overall I like the instruments you used. It all comes together and to be honest I'm a bit jealous haha. I'm still in the beginning stages of producing but listening to everyones track gives me inspiration to experiment and practice more.

Good track and good luck on your 2nd drop. To me personally it sounds good they say that shorter tracks are better when it gets straight to the point than having longer tracks drift the listener off. Unless you were intending for your track to be somewhat trippy.
14-08-2010 00:48 Homepage of amptek
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