 Monkey Nut1 - The Outsider |
Monkey Nut1
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Registration Date: 04-04-2010
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Please check out my new track 'The Outsider' and post your comments here!
Hi all... Well here is my latest offering, which i have been working on over the last few days. This track is titled "The Outsider". Once again, just an unfinished preview for everyone to feast their ears on, hope you all like it. Please leave me your comments and reviews.
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04-08-2010 13:53 |
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goonybag 
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I think a few elements could be added throughout the intro to spice it up a little, not a fan of the kik you have used, it seems a little too boomy for my liking. The intro goes for a while, id shorten it up. Ahhh, the drop, I like it! The kik is more centred and has the punc I was after, the bass sounds are great, and moves along nicely, really nice, I think a sub bass layer on some of your sounds would really help push it along even more. The drop is my favourite, the stripped back bit at 3 min 55 is cool, nice sub drops. Keep at it, I liove the drop and the latter part.
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04-08-2010 14:14 |
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Monkey Nut1
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cheers for the review my man, much appreciated... I will probably go through it again one day and take your comments on board when i do, thanks very much.
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04-08-2010 14:40 |
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pusha
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i hve that same sample u have used thats kind of like a cold machine coming in at 1.27 its a good sounding sample and iv just remembered where i got it from as well. nice track very bad companyesq. another high hat layer in the main beat wouldnt go a miss something on the 16ths line. snare could do comin forward a touch in mix. some more compression on kick to tighten it up a bit .mid bass's sound ok would. hi cut that vocal sample slightly. there are some nasty hi freq's in it. could do with some beefy sub bass under it has poteneds a little bit of work .ez
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04-08-2010 20:44 |
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ksd
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Registration Date: 27-10-2009
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hey...not bad at all for being just a preview..
i do like the drum work during the intro and it's a cool sample you did put in..
the intro is a bit long (2mins of intro for a 5 min song)
the bass synth has a nice sound but i find it a bit repetitive and the track is a bit empty...but as you said it's just a preview..
i do like the final part with only the sub..keep on it!
sorry for my english..
cheers ksd
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05-08-2010 23:03 |
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Akada
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ooowwww nasty drop, liking the intro and build up beats best. Top production as with ur previous work. IMO I would change the main bass sequesnce a bit, it doesn't do the the break justice. Also The xtra snare that comes in on 1.06 should go as there are enough good layers up until that point.
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06-08-2010 13:04 |
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csel
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Registration Date: 07-08-2010
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im drowning in your subs... its killing me argh!!!!! and those bass!!! you are guilty of murdering me!!!!
The pads are haunting me and i dont think i can turn off the lights to sleep!!! Those tiger growl also!!!
i like the drum loop its brings some asian feel to your song.
the sound effects really cool , it make the atmosphere of the song dark
but i think you could work more on the ghost note on the beat to make the song a lot tense and bring more energy to the song.
and maybe vary the drum pattern more.
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