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SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Dead Space' and post your comments here!

yay, advice on the mix would be awesome (or anything)

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04-08-2010 01:30
goonybag goonybag is a male
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drums are way too muddy, lack a lot of clarity. there is clearly plenty of power there, good strong sounds, but they are muffled. The bass sounds are rock solid, but also need to stand out more. Mate, the individual elements are devestatingly good, really, really powerful, but the mix overall lacks clarity and seperation. I am thinking it may be something on your master bus? As my issues are accross the board on all individual elements, get that sorted and you have a kick arse track for sure.

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04-08-2010 14:08 Homepage of goonybag
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agree with gooneybag on the muddiness of track something isn't right the. i'd go out on a limb here and say u make the best neuro i've heard on this site drums are spot on bass's are of spor quality got wicked presence and flow if ur 15 mate i think u are guna go far fuckin wicked track mate

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04-08-2010 20:49
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mow! sounds sick only drums sound very muffled not much clearly to them at all deff work on that because this tune is great just drum work needed and eq i am impressed overall i think when this one is done i will be massive excellent synth work bass is heavy i like the spacey feel it gives you its like being crushed in a spaceship lol



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05-08-2010 00:37 Homepage of SICKorWELL
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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Whoa, thanks big ups to you guys too... I do agree the drums are quite muddy (thanks to my stupid skullcandy headphones grrr....) And lol I actually turned 16 a few months ago sirax (pusha) so I guess i should change that... but yea thanks for the support!

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05-08-2010 00:59
ksd ksd is a male
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Nice one...i do really like it!
nice atmosphere in the intro and overall in the tune, i think it would be nice to hear the "psy alien trippy sound" from the intro also in the main part..
the bass sound is really nice...like the sound and how the filter acts on it...interesting and it has got some nice movement on it
the drums are punchy an cut trough the mix..the hats could be higher, can't almost hear them but that's my only complain...
sorry for my bad english..
cheers ksd
05-08-2010 22:28
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the bass and drums are wicked awesome.
15-08-2010 13:38
mjbedlam mjbedlam is a male
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There is a lot to like about this track but it does sound like it needs some work still. Mainly editing wise id say as when it drops it sounds pretty good. Maybe a longer intro with a few more sounds? Maybe im wrong but the drum patterns need to be edited better as it doesnt sound like you could mix this track in and out properly in a DJ set. Ive listened a few times and am still trying to work out if it is the offbeat drum pattern making me think this. Overall the track sounds nice and dark similar to some Noisia style tunes. It's also hard to judge how much mastering has been done if any as it sounds slighly raw in places.
22-08-2010 08:55 Homepage of mjbedlam
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thought I'd review this as I work for the company that Made Dead Space Extraction on the wii.. Wink

mix does sound like its missing its top end.
but I'll review the elements ignoring ther mix issues.
bass is NASTY!
Drums sounds tight. kick has depth and bite on the snare is great. crunchy!

fx sound good- great use of 'neuro-pan'! Smile
shame the track isnt longer.

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13-09-2010 21:32
optikal_assassin optikal_assassin is a male
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damn, now this is some bad ass shit. sick bass man. seriously love this. unfortunately it's soo short, but had i looked first i would have seen it said preview. My Mistake i was sitting here listening and it just stopped when it was really starting to sound good. you know, listening to this, the first thing that popped into my head was that dude tek infektion. i remember back in like 2002/2003 somewher ein there, he sent me some bassline samples he was making that kinda sounded like this.

intro is good stuff man, just run it out a bit longer, give me some anticipation for a drop. beats are crazy bizzness. my ears seems to be ok with the breaks man. i had to take the track to the monitors and they at least stand out pretty good so i won't real nitpick on the drum eq'ing.

but please tell me you plan on finishing this one out, unless you have a finished version and i missed it somewhere, cuz i'd definitely love to hear the full cut of this.

and sorry for bringing back a two month old track, just couldn't help but to say something. Bigup

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08-10-2010 05:00
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