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Muad'Dib 
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Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Cause you are a newbie, I shall be easy on you (like my tunes are worthy, so I can speak like that... 
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Ok, the review...
-Nice begining. That's what I've noticed. Nice break. Nice switching between snares...
the bassline is ok, but too noisy. Try adding a compressor, or if you have one, decrease the GAIN knob.
Nice techno theme you have here. Some raves I can hear... nice nice... but the end is without any real story. I mean, only cutting the sound? Try with stretched snares... only snares... etc...
Nice. If you continue like this, you ought to be excellent producer! 
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19-06-2004 02:40 |
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djfreemc
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Registration Date: 25-07-2003
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Nice beginning, especially when the drums kick in. I find the bassynths a bit overpowering the rest of the track, turn them down a bit. That distortion when u add a second bassline is not good indeed. The drums are good, but they may be a bit faster I think. At the end u seem to be going towards something different, that's probably the part u still need to work on as u mentioned, but the start of it allready made me curious.
Maybe layer a second sort of higher pitched & faster line over ur basses?
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19-06-2004 10:02 |
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32skins
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Registration Date: 12-06-2004
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thanks for checking out 
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any more?....
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19-06-2004 10:13 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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A bit slow. Speed it up a bit.
Drums are very nice, good work!
Bassline with the ping pong delay is nice, but a bit too loud.
Melody that comes in later is a bit too similar to the bassline, which makes it hard to make it stand out in the mix, so a more clear sound could be usefull here.
Good beginning for a tune, especially for your first track.
2/5
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22-06-2004 14:26 |
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Nosrac
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Registration Date: 15-12-2004
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Nice big sound. I don't think its too slow, but it need some fast hi hats to give it that illusion (bring em in and out). The snare has a bit too much of a "crack" to it. This seems like it could be a good part in a longer tune. The sound quality is big - I look forward to hearing your other stuff.
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22-12-2004 17:40 |
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kareem
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Registration Date: 10-11-2004
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recognize lot of the soundz.
You used them well.Nice beats altough they have some glitches.Snare is hard but I don't really like it.
Song doesn't really have a basic sound or tune.
Rather chaotic.And the bass bothers me cause it's just too loud.
2.5/5
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26-12-2004 16:01 |
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f0re1gn
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Registration Date: 20-12-2004
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:o Nice start, the bass came in pretty leetly. WOOT nice beats, good job (the second ones
) At 1:20 i'd suggest to put the bass non-stop, not like it stops, make it not breaky. Hope you understand what i mean
I'd give this track 2/5 prolly cuz it's not quite my style, but still, try changing the bass as i said above
Props!
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26-12-2004 21:31 |
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nice n clean
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11-11-2005 19:30 |
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Encypher
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Registration Date: 05-06-2005
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like how it starts nice synth need to bring in some nice sub bass with the drums, sine would work fine, tweak the EQ on both to accomodate for eachother. drums have good sounds but need loads more variation some high pace elaboration! bring in a more high end synth in second drop with a fresh line, delayd synth just doesnt give it the kick that part needs. i do love that stereo synth but still the streo could be improved a bit to follow the line.
keep going with this one sounds promising
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