 muaddib - Dawn of a New Era |
Muad'Dib 
Andrejnalin
Registration Date: 02-12-2003
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Please check out my new track 'Dawn of a New Era' and post your comments here!!!
Story:
The dawn of the New Era.... everything starts from the begining... telling stories and jokes... laughter... but also, again, dark things start creeping the surfaces of the Planets...
Men were destroyed in the last war... only few remained, yet they managed to build another worls, to continue the glorious history of Men....
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Tried to make nice and easy tune, so I used piano and trumpet. (Menacing through the rough space...) Listen to it, and tell me what u think.
BTW
I don't get many reviews nowadays, so please, please, guys, atleast 3-4 reviews? Thank you! :bigup:
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18-06-2004 19:14 |
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32skins
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 12-06-2004
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People really should give more comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thing you're trompet is too happy(too high) maybe you can lower that
Maybe try to add more bass
The song paste well with your story.
I don't like the echo on the snare that much
cheerzz
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20-06-2004 18:39 |
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32skins
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 12-06-2004
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paste=fits
mine englis is noth verie good 
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20-06-2004 18:44 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Hmmm
Not very fond of the sounds you chose. They don't fit very well with DnB imo.
And as s-pact said: the trompet sounds too high or too afressive. Would hurt my ears at slightly higher volume.
Like the snare, but slightly less reverb would have been better.
Kick needs a boost.
Not very intresting track imo, you've donne better...
1/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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22-06-2004 14:44 |
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PEAHEAD
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 27-07-2005
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nice, like them horns. dont kno about the piano tho, again hornz are nice, snare is pretty phatt mabye a little more high to give it more snap. is it goin to drop? NEEDS MORE ELEMENTS i think neways mabye some sweepin atmos or sumthin
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16-06-2007 07:48 |
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