 alternate force - I Dont Believe In God (jump Up) |
alternate force 
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Registration Date: 23-01-2009
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Please check out my new track 'I Dont Believe In God (jump Up)' and post your comments here!
ez .. my second attempt at a jump up track .. made on reason 4 !!
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29-07-2010 17:59 |
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Tonedef
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Registration Date: 05-07-2005
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likin the moody intro, drums need work, sound empty.nice idea with the main bass synth, but it doesnt work for me, needs to be a tad dirtier, not much sub either. the tune is there, but the production isnt quite yet. keep at 
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29-07-2010 18:25 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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nice ideas behind this some syths notes are out of tune some variation in sound would go down well not a bad attempt at jump up nice one
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29-07-2010 22:15 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The wobbly bass sounds like it has been shifted away from the drums. I'm constantly in doubt if I should nod my head to the drums or to the bass (which is obviously not the same thing). If you could fix this the track could be good, but now it doesn't work for me. Maybe if you don't close the cut off filter so much it will work better.
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29-07-2010 23:46 |
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goonybag
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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the intro pads are quite nice, the drums are nice n heavy although i would like to hear a different pattern, too standard for my liking in the build up. the bass sounds in the drop are good, but it sounds like the wobbles are a bit off, like they need to be dragged a touch forward or backwards maybe?
That is a really nice snare, I love it!
Defo change up the bass sounds more, just add a couple more to replace some of the measures that are there as atm it gets a little tiring.
I think with some bass changes this will be solid. mix is pretty good.
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31-07-2010 15:41 |
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