djfreemc 
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I would rather call it electro instead of drum'nbass actually, but whatever.
The drums are very basic, try to variate them, as well within a loop as by using more different loops. In all the track is quite repetetive & minimalistic (typically electro). For drum&bass I think u need to fill things up more, and ad more of a bassline.
It sounds very clear, that's a good point, try to keep that in whatever u do.
Good start 
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18-06-2004 19:51 |
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Surya
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The track is too slow to be DnB, what bmp is this?
Nice intro, but the hihats sound very low-fi.
Sub is nice and deep, but a bit too loud.
Snare sounds like an ordinary compressed 909. It's quite punchy which is good, but it's not loud enough.
Was wondering: is there a kick? Coz I can't hear any...
The LFOing sound is quite nice too, but the track is too repetetive and a bit boring. I think you'll need more elements to finish thisone.
1.5/5
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22-06-2004 14:22 |
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thechronic
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The kick is disguised as a bass hit 
Don't know what to think of it, it's definitely not dnb. Please upload only your dnb tracks here, if you want your other styles reviewed, upload them somewhere else and put a link in the offtopic forum!
I like the hypnotic synth line with the synchronised delay on it, the low bass annex kick sound is nice too, the way it goes deeper. For the rest it's very repetitive, almost got me in a state of meditation 
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27-08-2004 01:26 |
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Encypher
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really progressive needs alot of work but i like what ur trying to do youve obviously got some good ideas
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