drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » simage - Sunlight simage - Sunlight Author Post simage Simplicity is the key Registration Date: 19-03-2010 Posts: 239 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track 'Sunlight' and post your comments here! I got the idea of making a VIP version of Leafs because I quite like the piano phrases but the drums suck. I started working on it but found myself keeping only the piano part and cutting or renewing everything else so this is called Sunlight and not leafs VIP because it isn't to be called Leafs anymore This is as good as finished just some finishing touches which I hope you could help me with. Enjoy __ 23-07-2010 18:56 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Instrument in the drop is off tone from piano. Drums could do with some variation. __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 23-07-2010 22:02 simage Simplicity is the key Registration Date: 19-03-2010 Posts: 239 Helpfulness rating:  ok thanks for the clear review I'll work on it __ 23-07-2010 22:27 m-ej Master Producer Registration Date: 08-05-2008 Posts: 637 Helpfulness rating:  ez m8, nice intro here, piano makes me smile . battle drones right again m8 this duz require beat edits(just to get them to roll a bit more), and a few ghost hits wouldnt go a miss either sir. im not a lover of the big splashy snares unfortunately m8, id cut a bit of sustain out of the snare, lose the ish ish'ness of them. theres also a bass arp which im not really feeling soz m8. sub seems a little distant too.l a bit more work needed please sir. (hope i wasnt to hard on yah m8e). __ m-ej is taking a few steps back from forum life. 24-07-2010 13:03 simage Simplicity is the key Registration Date: 19-03-2010 Posts: 239 Helpfulness rating:  Ok thx. Yeah, I know my drums have to improve. You should listen to my first song Leafs and check out how crappy those drums were :p I'm just not a pro in putting variation into a drumline. I EQed the snare some more and sounding better right now imo ghost edits: the only thing I changed is add some tom hits from time to time. it's changed but i'm not quite convinced if it's for better or for worse. Can you give me an emailadress where I can send the new version to? __ 24-07-2010 14:32 Tonedef 2ginger Registration Date: 05-07-2005 Posts: 270 Helpfulness rating:  i like the piano at 1:12, shame it lasts for a few seconds. not feelin the trancy synth after, it doesnt fit the tune mate. i think you have something here ideas wise. as for your drums, try spending a day or two working solely on a good solid drum template, with lots of variation. you dont have to start from scratch every time you make a new tune 25-07-2010 11:34 stiffer Producer Registration Date: 06-10-2007 Posts: 60 the piano is distorting, get some eq on the low mids!! beat sounds pretty good maybe the hats are a tad loud!! could do with some ghost hits to add shuffle!! i dont really like the melody tbh but thats imo!! maybe another bass could be added above the sub, something a bit distorted or a netsky-esque wobble is what id like to hear i think!! not a bad effort though 06-08-2010 20:54 Dj-Lowprofile Producer Registration Date: 25-01-2005 Posts: 89 Helpfulness rating:  I wouls add some more to the drums - just a little bit of a change up in it can make a big difference also add some sort of a riser or build up to you drops and break downs...they can be very subtle and make a huge difference - really like the feel of this one though - reminds me of a tune I made. Good job! 08-08-2010 18:21 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » simage - Sunlight