 JAH YOUTH - Moving Forward |
JAH YOUTH 
Producer
Registration Date: 09-07-2008
Posts: 33
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Please check out my new track 'Moving Forward' and post your comments here!
Mellow tune with soft pads
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11-07-2010 17:43 |
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Monkey Nut1
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Registration Date: 04-04-2010
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Being very truthful, good effort, but i think as it is, it sounds a little lame, maybe it's just the sample rate. Could do with a little beefing up, also sounds a little repetitive, needs more variation maybe? Could have a nice liquid roller on your hands with a little work...
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11-07-2010 18:11 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Sounds like it never drops, could do with a tad more power in the drop. Bass is a bit on the weak side (fart-ish). Kick could use more power (compression) and a bit less distortion.. Drums lack every bit of tension, add some little bits here and there to make them more interesting and rolling.
Sound tends to crackle a bit at times(clipping). Make sure to lower all mixer levels a bit into the safe zone and then compress on the master with soft limiting to avoid agressive clipping.
Like it a lot, could use a couple of extra elements (e.g. in the breakdown and in the second drop).
Tune is too long, you have 3 drops now, make that 2 and keep it at 5 minutes(imo).
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11-07-2010 23:38 |
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JAH YOUTH
Producer
Registration Date: 09-07-2008
Posts: 33
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thanks alot battledrone. i will take your advice on my friend. im not perfect but one day i will get there. peace
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12-07-2010 00:23 |
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pusha
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Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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i'm assuming ur pretty new to making tunes so i will try and give advice that i think would be something to aim for hope this didnt sound patronising and sorry if im wrong i can see what ur gettin at with this tune but ur samples and synths and drums are very lifeless try and think of the energy of the song things need to be bigger and brighter and add a fatnness to ur sound take ur synths back to the lab and make them sound bigger if u know what i mean keep workin on it u'll get where u wanna be
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12-07-2010 21:41 |
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JAH YOUTH
Producer
Registration Date: 09-07-2008
Posts: 33
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yeah i am new at producing bro, and i thank people like you who are honest and tell me whats what. all im gonna do is keep on pushin. nice one man. peace
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13-07-2010 13:21 |
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Akada
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I agree with the reviews above mate. I do like the vocal sample and melody combination.
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14-07-2010 18:43 |
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