Please check out my new track 'Changes (clip)' and post your comments here!
Hey dotbe. Been a really long time. Was too busy with school and stuff. Got some time for production finaly. Sharing this preview of my latest tune. All other tunes can be found on my soundcloud http://soundcloud.com/wrmdnb.
The composition and the choice of sounds are excellent. The e-guitar lead suits the whole concept of your synth material and sounds very realistic and clean. I suppose it’s a real recording? Yours?
Your drums sit nicely in the mix, kick could have a bit more bottom end to it but I might be wrong. I like the programming even though I find it slightly too static and choppy. Maybe try to add a more natural groove in the main parts by layering additional content (break/shakers/ bongos or a drum rolls from time to time).
You could also try to introduce a more intense part where your distant bass sound gets more dominant and the drums a lot fuller and more energetic (also add some strings). Falling afterwards back to the original, chill scheme would be a nice contrast..
Overall I really enjoyed your work and listened multiple times to it. The dreamy and also filmic atmosphere is what I like the most.
Wow, your production is going somewhere...
sub could be a tad louder and have a tad more low mids. The melodies could be more inspired at some points, you might want to do some touching up, especially put some notes off the beat to get some tension into the melodies and use some filling elements.
Very promising!
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smooth guitar line there, id agree with what was said earlier tho - i think the beats need more work. some more shake and rythm to keep it interesting. nice bass that comes in a bit later, theres some good ideas here
