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illuminati
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 21-01-2004
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Please check out my new track 'Gyration' and post your comments here!!!
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15-06-2004 01:25 |
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Surya 
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Amen is very low-fi, work on that sound! This goes for the overall soundquality of the track too...
Drums layered over the amen aren't that powerfull. Kick needs more punch, now it just sounds like "plof" instead of "bam"
Bassline should be more noticable, boost it a bit.
The melody that comes in at 2.30 is too loud.
Not a bad tune
2.5/5
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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15-06-2004 11:54 |
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In my conviction d`n`b without bass is a lost d`n`b, otherwise mastering. 2:29 - that`s essence of this track and i like it but... hmm nothing special at last, i think it`s about underdone of arrange, poor master and powerless feeling. Try to do something little harder next time