 Glodaragz - Space Ship |
Glodaragz 
Cool Producer
Registration Date: 26-06-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Space Ship' and post your comments here!
Please follow this tips:
1.Shut the lights off
2.Put your headphones on
3.Play this song
4.Enjoy
Hope you gonna like it!
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03-07-2010 00:29 |
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Monkey Nut1
Destiny
Registration Date: 04-04-2010
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Hi... Love the synth intro, real atmosphere to it. Nice easy steppy litte break. Layed out well, nice tension build. The only problem for me is the guitar sounding sample and the little stabby sound don't really sit well? They sound a little off key at times, which throws the flow of the tune, other than that, nice chilled out little tune with a bit more work.
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03-07-2010 13:17 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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your snare almost sounds like a beefed up hi hat with a little bit of a thump on it. it desperately needs layerin nice peacefull vibe could use more of a break in it at points those electric guitar stabs do not work the melody is ok although think it could do with some rearrangement sounds bit cheesy at the mo
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04-07-2010 09:35 |
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goonybag
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not a fan of how you have used the hi hats to build to a drop, and the hats need some very slight delay to help with a little swing as atm they are a bit stiff. the track has a nice chilled out feel overall but does not seem to gell that well sonically, sounds all stuck together.
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04-07-2010 12:56 |
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freddy reeks
break yo self foooo
Registration Date: 10-02-2010
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Wikid intro, builds up nice!!! some stabs latter on are out... it ruins the vibe but its not hard 2 change. The gitar would benifit from some fx to make it sound a little thicker etc. Its also out in places quite alot. Maby some other spacy fx towards the end 2 giv some variation. Best trak u put up 4 shaw, keep at it.
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05-07-2010 18:58 |
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Nick ZZ
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Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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Like the progression of the tune, the intro is good. The drumz can use more offbeat hits, right now they seem very digital and flat. Maybe play around with your hats to make them more alive by changing the hits around the same time you have the extra kick pattern come in. The kick pattern is good, like the changes. One thing that can help is turn some of the hat hits down so they are not all at the same level, it will give them more motion. Another thing that will help is pitching some of the hits ever so slightly in a separate channel, most listeners will even not notice, but the subtle variation will help making them more attractive. Like the tune so far, just think it can use a little work with making the drumz more interesting. Cheers brutha. Z
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07-07-2010 08:35 |
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Glodaragz
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Registration Date: 26-06-2009
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Thanks for that lovely critics and coments, i really appreciated 
Hope that next tune will be better
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14-07-2010 01:24 |
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