 TuffDread - You Don't Understand |
TuffDread 
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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Please check out my new track 'You Don't Understand' and post your comments here!
Not had much time to produce recently and am really losing touch with the software and the whole idea of making a track. If you like it let me know, a little encouragement goes a long way. Cheerz, Tuff.
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26-06-2010 22:49 |
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goonybag
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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intro sounds a bit stiff, drums very robotic. Once the drop comes the drums loosen up a bit which is good, at this stag very basic. Keep at it, layer up a few of those synth sounds as well, they sound a little cold.
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27-06-2010 05:25 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Not bad, kick sounds a bit compressed to death.
Female vocal is too loud in the intro, it feels bad.
Like the amen fuckup.
Mixdown could improve a bit... mid part of the basses should be in stereo. The overall stereo of the track can be improved a lot. It would lift the tune to another level if you could improve the stereo and compress the master a bit more.
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27-06-2010 14:37 |
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pusha
waveform molester
Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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like the idea behind this track but for me its missing a groove the whole thing sounds quite robotic if i'm honest like i said some wicked ideas just some repatterning would give it more groove the whole track feels quite loose could do with tightening up a bit
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27-06-2010 16:01 |
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Pherro
Producer
Registration Date: 28-06-2010
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Not a bad premise here but needs a lot of work still.
The intro had me worried a lot, it just sounded to rough and unfinished. The synth sound you used in the intro honestly sounds like something you just picked up out of a sample list and dropped down.
Now once the second part starts it gets a fair good bit better, but there's still some flaws. The hats are way too loud and repetitive, And the glassy bass still sounds a little too untouched for my likings, but maybe that's just my preferences speaking.
Certainly not the worst I've heard but it still needs a lot of work, like I said.
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28-06-2010 14:39 |
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Gerrit
Kai
Registration Date: 16-05-2008
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Have to agree on most of the stuff that has been said here already.
A good start, but has lots of room for improvement.
- Lower the volume of the female voice a bit.
- Glassy bass is to pronounced I think, maybe soften it up a bit.
- Something is wrong with the hats, they sound kinda messy, try shortening them a bit perhaps?
- The snare needs some layering with a bit of a softer snare if you ask me.
- The drum pattern is a bit repetitive after a while, try adding some variation to it.
It's a decent start, but as said before, it needs some work.
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28-06-2010 18:29 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Registration Date: 23-01-2005
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Don't feel the drums on the intro, the atmosphere is nice though.
0:43 - RRRRRAAAAAAAUGH!!!!!! CORPSES IN THE MOSHPIT!!!!! Loving those bass sounds, and the drums are sweet too!
Finish it, it got loads of potential.
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29-06-2010 17:28 |
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recon47
Recon
Registration Date: 05-01-2009
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The intro is fairly deicent,i like the mashed up amen thing going on.
I take it you used a bit crusher on the mid sound and its all good but your levels need a bit of attention mate.
That hi hat thing im guessing is too me an amen EQ'd low end out or high pass if you want.Its far too wide and needs bringing back to the center,dont get me wrong,its a good layer but its too far out there.
Other than that and the levels,good stuff!!
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29-06-2010 23:27 |
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TuffDread
Mr. Tuff
Registration Date: 26-04-2005
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Thanks very much people, really appreciate it. I've found time this weekend to go back to an old track I started.
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03-07-2010 19:01 |
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