already better than your other songs, but all your synths play in different keys which makes the song sound off-tone. The intro piano can be a little bit more calm in my opinion too, but that's just me :p
I agree with the previous review, the synths do sound off key and a bit busy, it does affect the rest of the track. Saying that with a little work on the synths, you could have a nice little tune on the go.
the intro was long and when the drums start, it is same sounding, not much drum edits and you could add more different drum edits in your track,
the pads and bells are too much, its same sounding a lot, it gets boring, the bass is not very good,
in this track you could add a more different drum patterns, the bass could be much stronger and deeb, the pad and bells, you could add more and different pad & bell sounds, more variation, change the drums, bass, pads&bells, melody more , change the piano sound, its not good,
yeah its not good and not bad, its in the low mid level
hope your next dnb track is much better than this
so add more variations, drums, pads, melody and it will be good
Melodies are nice, but that piano-thing is in the wrong key or something, it's way off. Sounds are nice though. For a mellow type track like this I'd use more organic drums, these sound very static. Maybe try layering some chopped loops, add some ghosts and get some nice-sounding cymbals in there.
idk why but the intro reminds me of a cat being sneaky lol.
the roll of the sound there sounds a bit weird to me acctually.
bring that piano out more man!
takes a bit too long to really change. not enough happining for me.
bring that sub out a lil bit more maybe.
work on this some more, has got potiential man
good luck!
