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brucifer 
Making all the tunes your mum loves
Registration Date: 23-10-2007
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Please check out my new track 'June (dreamer)' and post your comments here!
Tune I've been messing with recently. All sounds my own, done with reason.
The first synth has a crackle sound going on. Been trying to get rid of it, but a bit stuck at the moment.
All comments, good/bad are appreciated.
Cheers =]
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16-06-2010 09:12 |
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LiquiDub
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Registration Date: 03-06-2010
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Some serious dark drum n bass you got goin on! And that crackle...lol, it works for me!?! it kinda compliments the whole dark kinda sound. Other than that, i think the main thing you need to work on here is structure, i can kinda make it out but just try dropping some synths out and see how it goes with your drum track, plus this'll leave you with some space to bring in a second drop. But please on your second drop do something to change your drum track up a bit, seems a bit repetitive atm, hope im not being too harsh. By the way i'm quite impressed with your synths well done mate, lastly, add a vocal sample, im sure you would've done anyway but this always helps the track. All the best.
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16-06-2010 21:51 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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crackle needs some decent EQing.
This stuff sounds very hollow.
Mixdown is not good at all.
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19-06-2010 20:24 |
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goonybag
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the intro sounds are ok, but the way you have programmed the synth lines sound a little disjointed and robotic, as do the drums once the song, quite abruptly, drops. Id work on the build up before the drop to add more intensity, and id also change that drum pattern, too many kiks I think, which stiffens it up a lot.
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22-06-2010 13:02 |
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KILLER_FAN
sssomebody ssstop me!!!
Registration Date: 23-01-2010
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uhh BSE drums style. nice. i like the synth in the intro but where is that crackle you said? can't hear it so i guess it's subtle and only you know about it. still no break in these entire almost 3 minutes? it's gets repetitive switching from one synth to another. nice work on the drums and the synths but it surely needs variation.
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22-06-2010 15:15 |
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