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den_bert
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Please check out my new track 'Starscape' and post your comments here!

I started out with a jump up tune and It sounded horrible. I only kept the lead and deleted everything else and started over. This is the result: something completly different. A liquid tune, enjoy Smile .
10-06-2010 16:47
Akada
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Yes mate feelin the groove in this one nice harmonies in there too. Sound quality is pretty good, not enough bass coming thru both on the kick and sub imo. Would say this has strong potential, however it feels like it needs more variation futher up the track. Vocal would be nice but not essential, some more fx would fill it out a bit more as it feels a little bare. Enjoyed it though nice and mellow.
12-06-2010 12:09
simage
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Change your kick and snare. Or the samples are really bad or you just EQed them wrong.
I like your intro but your drums actually decrease the coolness of it by their muffled sound.
One of the most important factors of dnb is and will always be your drums so try to put a lot of effort in it.
I really like the rest of your song so keep it up!
You should stay with liquid bcuz it's way cooler!



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12-06-2010 18:04
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Drums sound thin and too silent.
The pad-like bass is to dominant.
Mixdown sounds overly compressed, there's too little headroom to make it all enjoyable.
Some of those bleeps are way too loud compared to the rest of them.
The wobblish bass is way way way too silent.
Tune has potential, but it needs more work

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12-06-2010 23:29 Homepage of BattleDrone
goonybag goonybag is a male
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some good elements, a nice basic recipe, which is effective. Not my style of dnb but rolls along nicely. I think the snare could use just little more snap, not too much, at the moment it is a little fuzzy I think. Other than that, nice one.

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13-06-2010 01:41 Homepage of goonybag
den_bert
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thx for the feedback guys Drummer
not sure if ill finish this Big Grin .
16-06-2010 21:07
cluternfunk
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Yes I would buy this in a heart beat I love it it needs to be on records.
02-08-2010 17:54
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