drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » BLoodstain - Diamonds in the dump BLoodstain - Diamonds in the dump Author Post BLoodstain Tourist Registration Date: 27-03-2009 Posts: 20 My First track is almost Finished. My hat pattern is a big mess though, need to remake that. Hope you like it. Constructive Criticism is highly Appreciated. http://soundcloud.com/bloodstain 07-06-2010 22:50 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  Structure is ok. Instruments should be redone... get some better samples. For a first tune this is pretty good. Keep at it. Practise makes master. Do upload your tracks on here for decent feedback... Welcome on board! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 07-06-2010 23:04 BLoodstain Tourist Registration Date: 27-03-2009 Posts: 20 Well, my hat pattern is weak, my Kick is too soft, not punchy enough, snare doesn't have enough bass. But i've been working on my second tune, it's complete. can now go back working on this tune. thanks for the Feedback btw, where can i upload my songs? 12-06-2010 03:06 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » BLoodstain - Diamonds in the dump