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pusha
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Please check out my new track 'Finish Him' and post your comments here!
i have changed the break in this since i made it it has more roll now good or bad let me know
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07-06-2010 09:43 |
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BattleDrone 
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When the snare comes in I'm all confused, I was focusing on the wrong bars (1 & 3) for the snare as it seems, maybe you could avoid this by adding just a tad of snare from the beginning.
I don't like the snare you used, it doesn't blend in with the rest of the drums. I would pick a different snare.
The intro pads work better when you shift them 2 bars backward or forward, that way they don't follow the drums as much as they do now, this causes more tension which is good.
In the drop the snare is pretty powerless. Use sidechaining to let it push trough and make it more puchy.
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07-06-2010 12:03 |
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pusha
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yeh cheers battle i have already adressed a lot of the drum issue's this was a first copy that i've reeled off and stuck on various sites i haven't bounced a copy off the finished thing off yet touch more mastering i wanna do that and i may tae on board your advice about itroducing snare from start 
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07-06-2010 17:16 |
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dLO
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break is tight. Ghosts are spot on. Can try to widen the break by pushing the ride just a tiny bit to the R. The snare bugged me at first. The lower layer reminds me of a grungy snare almost Dave Ghrol back in the Nirvana days. But it fits this tune nicely - has that good aggressive vibe that fits nicely with the bass, which has some killer automation. Ver nice indeed.
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09-06-2010 01:28 |
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pusha
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ok think this snare needs adressing i have changed the break dan its more rollin now thanks for the votes and reviews guy's ........1 more any one so i can get my stars? lol
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09-06-2010 09:35 |
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goonybag
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I think the snare has too much decay and gets a little tiring, bass is hectic, im not sure if in a good way though in regards to the stutters, it could be too much in my opinion. Overall the production quality is great, just those few elements not jelling for me.
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09-06-2010 11:54 |
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Anarky
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beats soundin pretty fat 2 me-wicked sample b4 drop!! lovin the bassline mate absloute sikness!trak has some big potential i think-dunno if its jus me but the only fing i cud pik out wud be the sub soundin slitely muddy an possibly cud be a bit rounder an warmer-big tune tho mate,r u on soundcloud??
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10-06-2010 08:30 |
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pusha
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yeh mate i am i think iv added you look for pusha with the little it clown face mate or click here http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks
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10-06-2010 10:56 |
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pusha
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10-06-2010 10:58 |
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abstract 8
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nice ! ha ha ! it sounds like a krazzy mecanical duck .... yo good work keep it up , nice beats but u could make the main snare to change a litle sometimes
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11-06-2010 00:52 |
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3rr0rc0d3
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Defo liking that sample, haha!
Not sure about the snare, it doesn't quite cut it for me.
The bass and its automation is sick on this one though, very good stuff.
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14-06-2010 09:45 |
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