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Scurf 
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Registration Date: 26-10-2006
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Please check out my new track 'The Streets' and post your comments here!
Been long time since I`ve put something on the site, but i really need ur opinion on this one...
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06-06-2010 13:46 |
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Dubrain Hertz
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Nice intro, not really feeling the drums sounds, but that's just a matter of taste i guess.
1:00 - is this going somewhere? It feels a bit lost here, or maybe I'm just impatient.
1:17 - Nice!
Overall i think the drums are overpowering, drowning out the bass, turn them down, I think that will do quite a lot for the track. The bass itself probably needs some work too, can't feel it, even at high volumes. Maybe try and double it? Or just turn it up.
Nice atmosphere to this.
My two cents, keep it up.
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06-06-2010 16:21 |
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goonybag
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Kik sounds a little hollow, lacks a good centered punch and the decay on the snare is a little too much, id back it off and add a layer with a little more body.
Overall the drums are too loud and take the focus away from what you have done with your bass sounds, especially that snare. From what i can hear the bass work sounds pretty good, just needs to be brought forward more to keep the track pumping.
Good ideas happening with the breakdown, id go easy on bringing it all back in again though, ease it bit by bit, to add more drama. Keep at it.
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07-06-2010 13:24 |
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pusha
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overall tracks is nice good use of sound fx imo could use a really nasty bassline to set it off
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07-06-2010 17:12 |
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goonybag
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Originally posted by goonybag
back it off and add a layer with a little more body.
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id lower the level of the snare you have, reduce the decay, and add another snare as a layer that has a little more body, more punch and midrange.
sorry mate, im australian and somethimes forget I am leaving reviews for people everywhere around the world, and us aussies can be quite hard to understand I believe.
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10-06-2010 00:00 |
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Hudskov
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The snare is a bit out of place i think?? Like the sounds around it. Not sure about the flow, seems a bit staggered? Thought maybe its how you want it??? What do i know eh?? 
Very busy track, lots to take in thats for sure. Liking your work
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18-06-2010 23:54 |
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