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simage
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Please check out my new track 'Wandering Souls' and post your comments here!

Overall i'm quite happy with this one.
I focused some more on EQing and compressing,...
so yeah, review ahead Smile
this is Dark (preview) but then in the finished and BETTER version
Put your sub woofer on for this one bcuz the sub's really nice Smile

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05-06-2010 13:26
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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I like the way tune begins, What kind of sound is that?Also the bass is good, and the sub too. I really prefer break snares, maybe u should put it too,it would add on speed, and then the tune will be more interested.Also love the part when the beat is like in Sub Focus tune : "Time warp".Work on this,hope u will get more interested version!
Big ups!!!
05-06-2010 17:31 Homepage of Glodaragz
simage
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I like the way tune begins, What kind of sound is that?Also the bass is good, and the sub too. I really prefer break snares, maybe u should put it too,it would add on speed, and then the tune will be more interested.Also love the part when the beat is like in Sub Focus tune : "Time warp".Work on this,hope u will get more interested version!
Big ups!!!


K thx mate,
I'll try to add an amen snare.
The begin sound is an arpeggiator but phased and distorted

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05-06-2010 18:18
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Snare is too loud compared to kick (which is too silent) percussion is way to silent. snare could use a tiny bit of reverb to make it less dry.

Melodies are rock like and not DnB. The instruments al sound very gritty, use a saturator to take the edge off a bit.
Some sloppy edits here and there... needs work.

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06-06-2010 12:39 Homepage of BattleDrone
Dubrain Hertz Dubrain Hertz is a male
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Way too hard drums for the intro. The ARP is nice though.

Nice bass, but there seems to bee some freq conflict with something else in there. In genereal it needs some tidying up, try eq-ing away the bass from everything that isn't the bass.

Love how that second bass sneaks into the track, but again, frequency-issues.

Love the melodies though, loads of potential in this one.

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06-06-2010 17:10 Homepage of Dubrain Hertz
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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Melodies are rock like and not DnB.


I don't think thats bad!
06-06-2010 21:24 Homepage of Glodaragz
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nice drop, but you've got better drums on ur other tacks
18-06-2010 14:02
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well imo the kick and snare don't kiss and make-up very well. some hipass on the drums would have worked at .32. don no it stops too sudden. the arpegiated synth is nice and that hmmmed voice comes great.
i hear some harmonic detune between the reece synth and the bassline.
yeah and defo a bigger kick. maybe a hip hop styled, with more low end, not the housy trancy one i hear.
cheerios! get workin'
18-06-2010 19:32
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