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KILLER_FAN 
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Registration Date: 23-01-2010
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Please check out my new track '1' and post your comments here!
Amazingly i had the patience to work on this one. it's just a prev. i like how things went so far so i think i'm gonna stick to it to get a full version.
Comment would be very welcome about mixing, eq-ing etc etc etc.
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01-06-2010 14:12 |
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Tonedef
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nice intro. not likin the kickdrum much, doesnt match the snare, just bein picky tho. basically the 1st 1 min and 38 seconds is quality, i was thinkin yeah this tune gonna be good when it drops, but the rest of it, (with that tune change) i just didnt like it mate, nowhere near as good as the first part. i would develop your intro more, would make an excellent deep roller
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01-06-2010 17:57 |
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KILLER_FAN
sssomebody ssstop me!!!
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Originally posted by 2ginger
nice intro. not likin the kickdrum much, doesnt match the snare, just bein picky tho. basically the 1st 1 min and 38 seconds is quality, i was thinkin yeah this tune gonna be good when it drops, but the rest of it, (with that tune change) i just didnt like it mate, nowhere near as good as the first part. i would develop your intro more, would make an excellent deep roller |
many thanks for the review. you got my thoughts. i will change few things (as in the whole tune). i got new ideas... funny though that they don't last long enough to finish a track 
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01-06-2010 21:07 |
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Monkey Nut1
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Nice intro until the break kicks in, the two of them just don't seem in time and it kind of throws you a bit??? Some nice samples and layed out well in places, there are a couple of things i would change though! The 2nd break that comes in on 3:26 rides along better than the 1st and it needs a bit more variation? Could be a better tune with a bit of work. Sorry, but only being honest!!!
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01-06-2010 22:09 |
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goonybag
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intro is nice, drums sound ok to me, nice little ghost loop filling it out. the change for the drop loses all momentum created by that great intro, id delete everything from that change, keep the intro and start again. good potential though. keep at it.
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02-06-2010 00:29 |
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KILLER_FAN
sssomebody ssstop me!!!
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thanks very much guys. the new version will be much better
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02-06-2010 12:26 |
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bm84
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like that intro alot man sounds a bit different and nice melody. one criticism i have is one of the samples seems to be making a high pitched clicky noise. comes in at 5 secs, 11 and 16.not a huge fan of the buildup leading to the drop at 2.20, kinda felt like the track lost its focus there. the outro is nice too, between the intro an outro being developed a bit more togethere u could have a real nice track i reckon
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03-06-2010 09:40 |
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KILLER_FAN
sssomebody ssstop me!!!
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thanks for the comment man. what about that sample? the one that sounds like mobile phone right?
i've just finished the new version. kept the intro cause everyone said is good and modified the rest. i'm pretty happy how it turned out. still no rush to upload it cause i want to listen and see if i can spice it up a bit.
and i got a question btw. how can i delete this preview track and upload the finished one, with the same name, so i don't open a new thread?
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05-06-2010 20:56 |
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