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pusha
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Please check out my new track 'Whats Going On' and post your comments here!
ite .be this is something a bit different from me again gone down the liquid road with this one used predator 4 my synth work one shots 4 main break thor for pad work this just a preview i wanted to get sum feedback on from some of the weathered liquid producers on here bout my ideas i got down anyway good or bad let me know
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31-05-2010 10:32 |
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brucifer
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Real nice intro. Snare sounds a bit sharp though. Think it should be dropped a note or two and there is to much trebble on it.
Think your beats could roll a bit better. Need a few ghost shots. Bit robotic at the moment.
Bassline: Sounds a bit out of time to me at points. Needs quantising really.
Good work =]
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31-05-2010 10:44 |
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pusha
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it is quantasized i used pitch bend on it and i think it has messed it up some what
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31-05-2010 10:50 |
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m-ej
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fair play m8,
its close to where your trying to go with it.
as brucey has mentioned defo requires ghost hits to help it roll out a bit more
snares a bit splashy for my own tastes this days but its ok,
a few drum edits would go down well too nothing to drastic tho or it will sound over busy,
could have a nice lil roller on your hands here m8.
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31-05-2010 10:56 |
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pusha
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nice one close yeh listening back to it now i realise it sounds quite robotic and the snare could prob use another lower end layer so i can take the higher one down in the mix
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31-05-2010 11:01 |
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m-ej
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i was thinking more along the lines of shortening the snares sustain,
snap not splash kinda thing
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31-05-2010 11:04 |
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pusha
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this is litterally one snare tho i think some sort of layering is required but shortening the sus should work nicely as well
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31-05-2010 11:06 |
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Monkey Nut1
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Yea mate, defo a bit different from you, but still a top tune, some great samples, i used to play a lot of this kinda stuff out, nice to hear it again. There is only 1 thing i would change, other than that it's quality. Nice break, great vocals and bass, layed down lovely, very catchy... Nice one fella!!!
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31-05-2010 11:34 |
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Tonedef
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can see what your going for here. firstly the drums roll nicely, all i think you need is a strongish hat to bring it in line, there;s also one ghost snare thats too quiet, bring it out, it sounds good. i love the airy pads, spot on. bass sounds pretty good. then theres my one crit, and it pretty big sorry, that wob wob synth, one its out of pitch with the rest of the track, and two it just doesnt work in this track. sorry mate, i love the ideas of the rest of the track, if you ever put this up for a remix count me in
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31-05-2010 12:02 |
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pusha
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i know what u mean is it the first note that sounds like its rising its the pitch bend i think i'm guna ditch that i was goin to anyway will adress break and bass
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31-05-2010 12:14 |
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pusha
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[quote]Originally posted by 2ginger
that wob wob synth, one its out of pitch with the rest of the track, and two it just doesnt work in this track.
do u mean the mid range bass?
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31-05-2010 12:17 |
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bm84
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nice mate. vocal really suits it at the beginning but kinda feel it loses its effectiveness as the track gets going.i reckon some of the pad melodies could do with some tweaking but definitely a good effort at doing somethin different as ive heard quite a few of your other tracks and theyre a million miles away from this style! im also trying my hand at a liquid style track at the moment, which is a first for me
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31-05-2010 13:43 |
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Tonedef
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yeah. i dont mean to be harsh mate, its such a nice an smooth intro, just think you could develop that, maybe take it deeper, calibre style. bigups
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31-05-2010 13:54 |
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pusha
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i think il take that on board mate and ditch the wob wob 4 another track
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31-05-2010 14:26 |
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Tonedef
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look forward to hearin the finished version
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31-05-2010 14:27 |
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Monkey Nut1
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the wob wob as you say was the only thing i would have changed, don't fit the tune in my eyes, good idea to remove it and save for another track?
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31-05-2010 14:54 |
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drw89
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Starts off nice, sweet pads. Main lead sounds off, doesnt fit really with the pitchbends. Beats sound a bit dry, and i miss a hat layer.
Bass sounds nice and deep, pads are still nice. This track has potential, but the main lead doesn't fit and you could use some hats.
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31-05-2010 19:24 |
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dLO
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yea mate big liquid vibe goin on here. Love the intro. Love the bass - it has a bit of your signature style, but is really unique when teamed up w/ the liquid tip. Love the minimal feel here. Just an overall nice foray into the liquid side for ya. big up!
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04-06-2010 03:43 |
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pusha
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cheers danny this kinda didn't really go down to well lol u goot a youtube account bro
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04-06-2010 20:45 |
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LiquiDub
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#Whats goin on# lol I love the intro a lot man real nice. Nice drum sounds aswell that kick and snare really stands out for me, now i know this is a preview but when you get to mixing/mastering jus budge that bass down a bit lol it sounds great its just overpowering everythin else a little bit.. hope thats not too harsh, plus i like that tremelo synth you got goin on, sounds like your using the LFO but whatever it is.. great vibe! try changing the sound to a less raspier one if that makes sense, make it a little more smoother, i think that would compliment the idea of liquid drum n bass. Lastly, its a great track man, i can't wait to hear the finished product!
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05-06-2010 21:09 |
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