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vel
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Please check out my new track 'Signal X' and post your comments here!
back to making dnb again just started this track yesterday just need some advice on the actual tune it self and mixdown thanks
peace
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31-05-2010 03:13 |
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Monkey Nut1
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Some nice samples in this track, but for me personaly, not used to their full potential. Track drops nicely at 1:08 though, i think it may benefit from a different intro, but that's just personal taste! Overall, nice break, great bass, well put together, well done!
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31-05-2010 09:38 |
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pusha
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i was really waiting for this track to take off and rip my head off its got all the potential to but it never came add some more rolling breaks at drop and bring the one u got aleady 4wards in the mix got massive potential
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31-05-2010 10:19 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Right then, I'm listening on a normal stereo and the panning is horendous, so god knows what it would be lke on headphones...
Beats need thickening up. Love the bass sound, really nice.
Your track is missing loads of frequencies, which is giving it a hollow effect. Not to good.
Some nice idea, just sort out the panning =]
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31-05-2010 10:56 |
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brucifer
Making all the tunes your mum loves
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Right then, I'm listening on a normal stereo and the panning is horendous, so god knows what it would be lke on headphones...
Beats need thickening up. Love the bass sound, really nice.
Your track is missing loads of frequencies, which is giving it a hollow effect. Not to good.
Some nice idea, just sort out the panning =]
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31-05-2010 10:56 |
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vel
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yes mate thanks for the advice i take all on boared
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31-05-2010 15:40 |
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Ok I'll let others guide u on the mixdown. . . I think the ideas are there, i like the sounds used and the atmosphere you are going for. The theme and samples work well with the drop. The track needs some subtle variation or increased complexity for the journey. After the fist break you could drop into a more frantic section, that might work. The final master will need attention as will the length of the intro but good work I like it, look forward to edit 2.
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01-06-2010 10:48 |
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vel
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Nice 1 waw waw cheers mate
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01-06-2010 18:12 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Wow, panning hihats makes me seasick the snare has some artificial panning on it, keep it pretty mono please, it sounds like it's playing in the upper right side of my head now.
All in all playing with panning should be kept as some kind of gimmick which you do 1 or 2 times in a tune.
Your tune sounds very ear fatiguing because of the panning and it seems like you used some maximising as well.
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01-06-2010 19:52 |
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