drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » BREACH - Too Dark BREACH - Too Dark Author Post BREACH Producer Registration Date: 21-05-2010 Posts: 14 Please check out my new track 'Too Dark' and post your comments here! Hey peeps this is my 1st upload just an early stage piece that i have spent a couple of nights on. Has a long way to go but keen for feedback, ta 21-05-2010 12:13 additive DROP IT! Registration Date: 09-02-2005 Posts: 277 Helpfulness rating:  Nice work! sounds like a bit of the ol' massive reese happening in there I reckon you need to spread the drums a little bit - they are very centred, which makes the reece too wide, and sound like it's a different track... at 1:14 the reese change is kickass... Did you make that drum loop? it's top notch mate. I can feel this one! __ http://www.additivemusic.com http://www.facebook.com/pages/additive-music/497601575363?ref=ts 21-05-2010 12:22 BattleDrone 2161... the future. Registration Date: 30-12-2005 Posts: 6,413 Helpfulness rating:  The mixdown has a bit too much reverb. Some clicking in the breakdown (at the end of the repeated "bass" vocal). The bass sound you picked doesn't hit me, it is a bit too much on the friendly side. Tune sounds quite pro otherwise. The vocal stutter in the intro is great, good drum rolls and variations and the structure is spot on! __ Check my soundcloud (exclusive tracks on there) 21-05-2010 12:39 pusha waveform molester Registration Date: 07-01-2010 Posts: 757 Helpfulness rating:  not really a fan of the vocal beats are good very ram recordsy bass is good im not a massive fan of reeses to be honest but this is a wicked track mate bigup __ buy the ticket take the ride 21-05-2010 20:44 goonybag Wicked Producer Registration Date: 12-11-2006 Posts: 349 Helpfulness rating:  some good ideas, overall production is tight. personally id change the bass and try to make it dirtier and more direct. look forward to finished version. __ www.soundcloud.com/hyphae 23-05-2010 04:07 BREACH Producer Registration Date: 21-05-2010 Posts: 14 Thanks to all for comments. havent done any more to the project yet but when i get on to it this week i know what to attack and clean up so thanks once again, mostly made this tune on a hi-fi but to finish off will have to hook up the monitors so hopefully will have something good to upload real soon! 23-05-2010 06:37 Glodaragz Cool Producer Registration Date: 26-06-2009 Posts: 161 Helpfulness rating:  The bass is really dark .Love the melodies of bass and that synth on the background.Drums are great.Big ups and nice work. Keep it up! 23-05-2010 15:55 Basso Basso Registration Date: 15-05-2010 Posts: 24 great track, nice synth at 0:49 after a solid fill. superbly growly bass and some very nice tom fills,drums are very well mixed. possibly put more breaks in the first section verging on mini buildups, but other wise nice, i aknowledge but the filters and tom fills but i think you could afford to push your boundaries on syncopated rhythms and cross rhythms, but if you wanted to keep it simple then s'all good mayn. nice buildup liking the cut up vocals alot love that hardcoreish style in dnb. and nice drop and nice etc. __ Check out more of my tunes at: http://www.soundcloud.com/bassobeats/tracks 23-05-2010 21:30 Nick ZZ Master Producer Registration Date: 29-05-2005 Posts: 960 Helpfulness rating:  -intro is nice -like the vocals and FX -Like the drum edits -synths are nice -Good tune brutha! Z __ Nick & Erina Z http://www.beatbiz.net/artist.php?USERID=493 24-05-2010 01:46 3rr0rc0d3 Cool Producer Registration Date: 08-07-2003 Posts: 195 Helpfulness rating:  Loving this... seriously! The only thing I'd change is giving the beats some more room in the mix, like Additive already mentioned. Kicking tune, mate! __ Cheers, /error SoundCloud 26-05-2010 09:40 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » BREACH - Too Dark