nice piano there, like the bass sound too.the drums are definitely an improvement from ur last track, nice work.only thing id change is the kick drum pattern, just so it varies a bit with the double kick only happening sometimes but thats personal. chillin vibes
you have some good ideas man, piano's nice, its a little outta time in places, easy fix. yeah its a clean beat, layer up a bit tho mate, could be a bit stronger. could be a wicked tune with some more effort. nice work anyways
have u taken that stabby piaano from an old 80s song ? push it to the limit i think its called drums aint bad track is extremely repetative would beneifit massively from some automation and sick bass edits
The kik sounds a little bit thin 2 me, maby some variation with the kik aswell in the 1st half of fhe trak, Good vibes thou, piano is wikid, good job, big up
nice keys & drums in the intro. The pad sounds a little preset-y to me, tho. not sure how to fix that tho. snare & ride are money, but the kick could use a little more thudding. Personally, i think this would sound good w/ the keys & a nasty bass.
Overall, add some drum edits & maybe work on a good bass and this could be really ripping. Has a nice blend of liquid & borderline dark vibe.
Ha! I really like what you're going for her, but there's things that need improvement. It's a very muddy mix, and the piano sounds a little "dry", as in a dry out of the box piano vst without any EQ'ing, reverb or anything being applied to it. It's a matter of personal preference I have noticed, I really like to cut out the muddiness of my pianos (~500-900hz) while a friend of mine who makes primarily piano tunes & orchestral music likes to boost that range. In any case you should work on giving each instrument its place in the mix, especially clearing that muddy area at least for the other instruments then, and leveling volumes and balances so that that nice plucked string sound comes out a bit more. The composition is very good in my opinion, just the production has work to be done. Like the genre :-)
the piano could be polished more. the break is repetitive for me, and i personally dont like the ride at the top of it. the intro is really short with a lot of bass, but that wouldnt be a big problem. would like the main breakdown to be more interesting and the whole tune too tbh. your on the right track, but there's a lot of work ahead of ya i think. good luck next time
this tune has a light happy feel to it all tho i did feel it was lacking impact a bit i think maybe the bass needs a little work im not sure what u use but i recommend massive for big mid bass just make a huge sound with say a square or saw wave and set envelope to a cutoff like scream or even just a low pass also compressing the sub lots will give it more power i usually put the ratio up to 50.00:1 pull threshold down to just below the peak then switch down attack and release to nothing then slowly bring up the attack till u feel the sub pushing then just apply make up gain as required i hope this is helpfull, its not all bad i do like the melody and this tune shows promise with a few tweaks and new mid bass i look forward to seeing how it progresses
