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Very minimal Quick roller that i threw together recently. Still a work in progress. Was goin for a 36hertz / dj vapour stylie. really like the bass on this, cant stand the snare... hoping for feedback on whether or not its worth finishing.
You have great bass here,i even love the snare ( i don't know why u don't like it),ef. are great.The female and male vocals are great.This tune is worth to finish ! Big ups!
Originally posted by Glodaragz
You have great bass here,i even love the snare ( i don't know why u don't like it),ef. are great.The female and male vocals are great.This tune is worth to finish ! Big ups!
What he said. ^
The only thing I don't like is the laser stab at 1:20, seems to pull away from the track a bit. (Could be just me though, never really liked that sound)
Originally posted by Glodaragz
You have great bass here,i even love the snare ( i don't know why u don't like it),ef. are great.The female and male vocals are great.This tune is worth to finish ! Big ups!
What he said. ^
The only thing I don't like is the laser stab at 1:20, seems to pull away from the track a bit. (Could be just me though, never really liked that sound)
Originally posted by 3rr0rc0d3
What he said. ^
The only thing I don't like is the laser stab at 1:20, seems to pull away from the track a bit. (Could be just me though, never really liked that sound)
What u didn't understand?
I just pointed out that I agreed with what you said, mate
maybe layer a phatter snare and compress the mids on the drums a bit less might make it smoother. love the synths tho and bass. bring that vocal sample up its pretty nice. nice halftime and delay as well. squarepusheresque.
really likin this one! i also think the snare is good and the drum edits. feelin the heavy, punchy sub also.i like the droney delay sample that makes up alot of the melody. arrangement is interesting on this track also, nice one
Originally posted by 3rr0rc0d3
What he said. ^
The only thing I don't like is the laser stab at 1:20, seems to pull away from the track a bit. (Could be just me though, never really liked that sound)
What u didn't understand?
I just pointed out that I agreed with what you said, mate
Nice intelligent intro, on a personal note, i would of maybe made the intro a bit more sweepy without the break straight from the off, but it does work for sure, i think it is defo worth finishing. I used to play this kind of material out many years ago, it's nice to hear it again. I agree with the producer, the bassline is awesome, nice a prominent, crisp and clear. Would love to hear this bassline through a nice system, would make your teeth rattle i reckon. This is a nice steady flowing track, with great samples, that are layed out very well, i would like to hear a finished version, but leave the bass as it is. I think the break is fine? Very choppy, would keep anyone on the floor? All in all, a great piece of work that you should be proud of. On a personal note, i would have darkened it up slightly, but then again, i do that to everything, keep it up.
love the intro on this, so old school. id beef up the beats a little, in comparison to the sub (which is great) its a little weak. nice use of effects, there important in tunes like these. id finish it mate, just experiment with the snare (layers ect) you'l soon find something your happy with.
nice track dan got wkd flo man i think that snare is fine dont be to hard on urself there this choon really took me back as it goes i know a lot of pple that would rock this track out and about bigup
hmmm very old school indeed m8
id take a bit of compression of the beats,
they sound a touch watery(not slating, its the effect that over comping causes),
clean up those beats man there wicked,
raise the beats level a tad, tune done.
peace.
mej
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thanks for the kind feedback guys. I'm hoping to have some time to finish this off this week. Might try to color it w/ some more fx b/c its a little too sparse i think and work on the drums more. thanks again. I'll try to repost when its done or throw up a link to a final version.
like the bass and its notes. but the beat is too weak i think. the tune reminds me of ltj bukem's old things. atmospheric and subtle. if the break was better, it would be a nice track, so finish ! :p
first of all id like to say how much i like the overall old-style vibe you seemed to capture very nicely in this tune. i do agree the drums are a little thin have u tryed maybe pushing some desirable frequencys with a parametric eq maybe between 180-220 hz otherwise maybe layer a punchier snare but i definitely think this deserves finishing all the sounds tie in nicely and work well together i guess its the trip down memory lane that this tune takes me down that makes it something that stands out to me. keep at it, in my opinion its got something that many struggle to create
lovely chill intro, sub bass just rapes my ear <3
the kick in your break should have some more punch, and I like the snare no problems there!
should have some eqing done with your break man, sounds like its a bit high passed.
go on with this fo sure!
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