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secondopinion secondopinion is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Liquid Memories' and post your comments here!

tune ive been workin on with my chum shanx may have a vocal in the finished version

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16-05-2010 09:48
Tonedef Tonedef is a male
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funky intro mate, enjoyed the first drop, nice and strong sub, although the guitar sounds a little drowned in the mix . also i think maybe your snare could do with a little more punch, sounds a little quiet. overall its a nice little summer roller.
16-05-2010 10:08
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cheers mate, yeah the snare isnt as prominent and snappy as i would like and totally agree on the guitar should hopefully have time to work on this soon lol

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16-05-2010 10:26
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Nice guitar stabs
that second synth comein in could be little louder and with some reeverb. Drums are nice, snare could use some snap factor. Bass has huge potential use it some more man. The whole thing is kind of repetitive, but the vibde you givin is very good, reminds me smoehow on SUV, dont know if you know him.
keep in the good work

8/ 10 for me

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16-05-2010 12:43 Homepage of tryptech
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Needs some extra elements to give it the required richness. Some instruments have crackling artifacts going on. Pitching sound before the second drop isn't always at the same level, could build up to a bigger climax.

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16-05-2010 17:59 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Did you record the guitar chords yourself? bcuz they could sound cool but they don't sound clear. same as I hear a sort of crisping sound on the background dunno if it's the intention but it somehow interferes with the other sounds.

I like this track overall but it isn't mastered great

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16-05-2010 18:36
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The Sub Bass is great,Guitar sample is good, but u should change the melody,because its rep. over and over again (it's kind of boring).The drums are good, but i thing they don't match with the tune.Try to find vocal,that will make tune more interesting.Any way nice tune, you should work on this! Big Ups Smile
16-05-2010 19:44 Homepage of Glodaragz
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were locked into the sounds of mr secondop Tongue . how ya been man long time no speak?

like the guitars in the tune they sound v nice, beats roll nicely along and sound nice. bass sounds sweet, i think the tune could benefit more from a few new elements, i reckon it would help the tune progress nicely, maybe a nice soft female vocal would work well as you said, nice ideas though man

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16-05-2010 21:18
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sounds like a kareoke of pieces by plan B and i love that tune so bye
17-05-2010 01:05
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The guitar sample is shit dont listen to them its bad n dont sound nice
17-05-2010 01:07
Tonedef Tonedef is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by analysiss
The guitar sample is shit dont listen to them its bad n dont sound nice


honestly.............

what great constructive criticism... (for fuck sake)
17-05-2010 01:16
Glodaragz Glodaragz is a male
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quote:
Originally posted by analysiss
The guitar sample is shit dont listen to them its bad n dont sound nice

That is relative thing,the guitar is not so bad, but it is playing over and over and over and over......
17-05-2010 05:55 Homepage of Glodaragz
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nice intro. as others have said... that guitar sample needs to be cleaned up to get rid of the crackling. Wish the first drop would have had a little more climax. The sub is sick and your break is tight. I think this tune might benefit from dropping that guitar out and just rolling the dnb Wink that way when the guitar does come back its sucks you back in (at least that's how i think of it in my head) The parts w/ out the guitar become your "verses" and the parts with the guitar become the hooks or "choruses" i dunno just my opinion. Pretty good tune would be curious to hear it w/ vox.

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17-05-2010 15:03
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Wikid idea, Sound pretty different 2 most stuff, creates a good atmosphere. The bass that comes in at the end of the bars needs more energy, Its sounds good but I think you could get it to sound alot better.
18-05-2010 18:09
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nice guitar intro and likin the vinyl effect. the intro is good and builds it up well. i also like the sound of ya sub, but i reckon the snare needs a bit of work. the arrangement cud do with some work to keep it interestin, nice vibe overall tho

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18-05-2010 23:22 Homepage of bm84
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