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Akada
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Please check out my new track 'Irritation' and post your comments here!
Ok its 23.40pm and I found this old one. Thinking of re-working it. Its UNMASTERED so sorry for any nasties. Old style but quite energetic in my opinion. Feedback appreciated thanks for ur time . . . .
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16-05-2010 00:40 |
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Tonedef 
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Registration Date: 05-07-2005
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noticing alot of reason sounds in this bro, its interesting but its not really going anywhere, dont really rate it as one of your best after all ive heard from you, if you were to work on it, it could do with some feeling in it, but id concentrate on somethin else, you have plenty of better tunes.
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16-05-2010 10:04 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Lots of enrgy here, i love the synth fading in, indeed very oldskolisch vibe. Mix is oke, bass is oke, it all had that oldskool vibe.
around 1 16, i like the drums their, and that synth
nice nergy, mixdown is kind of odd, but like you said its older
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16-05-2010 12:41 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The wacko stereo panning isn't fun to listen to on headphones. Not sure about a lot of elements in the tune. It starts off great (Bad Company like) but then it slides off pretty soon into a swamp of liquidish stuff (around 2001 this style was hot).
Needs work!
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16-05-2010 18:02 |
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pusha
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not really my thing mix down is pretty shocking sounds proper old
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16-05-2010 18:37 |
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pusha
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Sorry if this sounds harsh but I have heard much better stuff from you before I know this is an old track but this seems kind of a step back to me sorry just bein honest
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16-05-2010 20:44 |
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analysiss
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Registration Date: 02-10-2009
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ez man only listened to 54 secs but yeah theres some nice stuff (nice sub) like some (mist) sub,i like the pad sounds n the breaks just strip it down abit n it will sound nice as in some stages its abit choaotic but with regards to tune making and content ur pretty much thee wicked mate GO BACK IN peAce bro
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17-05-2010 00:55 |
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analysiss
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sort the name out aswell hehe, the arrangement nees reworking as u kno thets why ur going bk (i like it mate ccol tune try n get everything to stand out in the mix as best u can)let me kno if u want remix peace bro (nice snare)by the way
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17-05-2010 01:03 |
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asheriscool
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Registration Date: 19-02-2010
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haha, this track is pretty awesome!! the drums have a nice gritty distortion type tone to it in the intro which is cool. I like when the beat comes in a little harder around 1:07 there's some scratch like samples and the synth chords sound a little bigger. this is a sweet track man, i love the atmosphere and mood to it. the change at 1:48ish comes in nice, but leading back into the main riff it could use a bit of work. maybe you could add one of those white noise filtering effects or something to add something dramatic. but overall i like this track and i think it could be really sweet if you re-work it as you've stated you might in the description!!
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17-05-2010 13:30 |
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dLO
dannyLO
Registration Date: 29-05-2009
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yikes on tha panning - little excessive. Really like the intro otherwise tho. Wish the drop was a little more climatic, but guessing that'd be addressed in the re-work. I'm really diggin the bass a lot. Not a big fan of the drone-y pads tho. This has potential. Maybe a little focus. There's a lot of elements that IMO don't fit too well together, but there's def some good stuff - the bass, as i said, and some of the drum edits
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17-05-2010 14:57 |
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bm84
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i quite like the pan drum thing for the intro but should prob stop for the main part i reckon as it starts to weaken the drums. quite like some of the bass sounds in this
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18-05-2010 23:16 |
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