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simage
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Please check out my new track 'Long Day, Short Night' and post your comments here!

New song by Simage.

Please give me some reviews.
Vocals are just for filling up the song.

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12-05-2010 15:58
bm84 bm84 is a male
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drums sound slightly robotic here altho im likin the piano and the ragga vocals are cool! they suit the vibe well, maybe need em a tad louder tho? the break at 1.57 sounds slightly empty and im not too sure about the effects on the vocals theyre a bit over the top. got some cool ideas here tho

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12-05-2010 18:01 Homepage of bm84
simage
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Cheers mate.
Yes i'm still trying to perfect my drums.

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12-05-2010 21:06
SteakJohnson SteakJohnson is a male
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I like this one alot but I was really expectin a more intense drop at 1:07 becuase of that cool drum roll.
Work on layering those beats and stuff, the vibes are really nice.

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12-05-2010 23:02
c_ctrl c_ctrl is a male
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Nice pads n melodies in the intro. Drums need some work but they sound like they're on the right track, give it a few more tunes mate Wink Nice reesey buildup but it could drop way more heavy. Maybe bring up the higher frequencies in the drums and get some reverb goin on, it all sounds quite dry. Loving the vibe tho and if you tonked up that break that rolls in 2.10ish it would be wicked. Nice work tho mate

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12-05-2010 23:45 Homepage of c_ctrl
simage
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ok thx guys, I considered the song finished but i'll try to concentrate on making a heavier drop.
I'll upload the finished song in a week or so. thx

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13-05-2010 13:36
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nice chord sequence.. drums are quite thin in the intro though, and they trip up a bit. when the drums trip up a lot, it's hard to get the feel for it. Ahh the drop, I'm not really feeling it. seems to be a lack of bass.. Also that piano, being the only real organic sound (besides the one hits) in there is a bit disconcerting. at 3:27, there's a nice break though... that could be used throughout more.
Good effort overall man. keep at it!


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13-05-2010 16:21 Homepage of additive
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cool, I like it, good vibe
13-05-2010 21:06
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good ideas, just add some fills on the drums, and the track has immediately lots of energy, the ideas are good, just the mixing needs some work, im not a good mixer myself, but people like battle en additive, binary havoc,etc. theyre good at it maybe pm them for some tip. Just keep training your ears.
Piano stabs are nice, vocals needs to be little louder in the mix, kick could be little louder to match the loudness of the snare.
greezt

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15-05-2010 12:41 Homepage of tryptech
Basso Basso is a male
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it's good man, i like the piano but did u program that or is it sampled? it needs a little more "interest generators" in my opinion, gets a little stale after a while, would probli be nice to mix tho. i can't decide whether i like the bass sound or not, it's interesting but a bit simplistic, bassline's nice tho, reminds me of mum (ambient artist). snares got a nice "pounce" to it. i htink drums overrall could do with a little less reverb maybe? anyway man overall chillin but if you spent a little more time on it could get it to that next dimension.

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18-05-2010 23:43 Homepage of Basso
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