drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » JAH YOUTH - Rar Ted JAH YOUTH - Rar Ted Author Post JAH YOUTH Producer Registration Date: 09-07-2008 Posts: 33 Please check out my new track 'Rar Ted' and post your comments here! two step d n b, with a king tubby's version dub mid way sample through(nn19/sound forge). tune done on reason 3, f/x and bass line done on subtractor. 09-05-2010 16:37 simage Simplicity is the key Registration Date: 19-03-2010 Posts: 239 Helpfulness rating:  The pan is too wide. Makes me a bit seasick. Adjust the pan to close to the middle but really mate this hurts to listen too. Your reese is way too loud and sounds crispy but not in the good way. A few parts in your song don't actually belong there. Your intro 's kinda liquid but than the rest... Also no variation. Keep practising alot and you'll get there but this is not good at all. __ 09-05-2010 21:24 JAH YOUTH Producer Registration Date: 09-07-2008 Posts: 33 alrite simage. the tunes it'self aint bad for my very first tune. i made it a few years back. but it's all good. thanx 4 the comments 09-05-2010 22:45 dLO dannyLO Registration Date: 29-05-2009 Posts: 325 Helpfulness rating:  nice panning in intro. Little wide maybe. Woah, just dropped... not expecting that after that intro. Aside from bass being too loud this is pretty dope. I'm a little confused by the tubby chop in there. Sounds like somebody turned the radio station hahaha. Get some more fx in here maybe add a pad or something over that 2step part and make it flow better and this can be cool __ follow me here: http://soundcloud.com/dannylo 10-05-2010 15:19 JAH YOUTH Producer Registration Date: 09-07-2008 Posts: 33 Ha ha. Thanx man, i agree. gonna fix it for real, but thanx for listening tho yeah. peace :> 11-05-2010 15:20 bm84 Bone Man Registration Date: 14-11-2007 Posts: 171 Helpfulness rating:  the drop didnt really suit the intro, and the bass was too loud, kinda makes it difficult to listen to. think the drums could do with some work too. that king tubby sample is mint tho! maybe base a tune around that? with some smashin amens.... __ www.soundcloud.com/bone-man 12-05-2010 18:08 c_ctrl Wicked Producer Registration Date: 02-06-2008 Posts: 307 Helpfulness rating:  Ha I like the name. Bassline is a little disjointed from the intro. But the intro and the little 'piow piow piow' could be worked into a wicked hook. Sack off the bassline, keep it for another tune and work on the intro, 'piows' and the tubby sample into a new tune, get the levels right and it'd be all good bro, especially if you made it a few years back you shouldn't mind ripping it apart for bits __ DeCode & Roary Soundcloud 12-05-2010 23:57 freddy reeks break yo self foooo Registration Date: 10-02-2010 Posts: 145 Helpfulness rating:  Sounds oldskool!! Some of the fx sound pretty loud 2 me, the bass coud b a bit thicker maby aswell, the regae bit sound good 13-05-2010 21:12 JAH YOUTH Producer Registration Date: 09-07-2008 Posts: 33 Thanx so much for listenin to this tune peeples. Gonna come better next and thanx for tha advice. Takin that on board. God bless 14-05-2010 15:21 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » JAH YOUTH - Rar Ted